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Strangers Again


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  11 total reviews 
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Long lasting relationships require a lot of forgiveness on both sides and if you just can't forgive some things then the union stagnates, being broken hearted is not a good foundation for future wealth and love, poignant words here, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 11-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
    thank you
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The lyrics here drill down to where anyone who has lost a relationship can feel. Having it, losing it, and realizing that it will never really be fully recoverable is a tough row to hoe. Your lyrics bring that out, and your rendition of the song gives voice to the words.


 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
    Thank you so much for the review. Im glad to hear it?s relatable. And you are spot on, it?s the realization that it?ll never be the same again. Thanks again. - Sam
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If we could give a 7, your poem-song would get one. This is a poignant, moving blend of the wonderful highs and devastating lows of a relationship that was "almost enough."


 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
    This means a lot to me. This song was written from a personal experience. I?m glad that you liked it.
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Strangers Again
by prodigal

Hello my friend

I love your heartfelt poem about lover's breaking up... And becoming strangers again...I know how it feels. I've gone through the same. Well done.


 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
    No other choice sometimes. Thanks for the kind review.
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Jeffrey L. Michaux
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It happens just like this sometimes. Before you even know it, as you've so eloquently stated, you're strangers again. This is good work and beautiful. I love the powerful message conveyed in this and enjoyed reading this thought provoking and well written work. Well done!


 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
    Hey many thanks for the great review. We go through so much just to be strangers again.

    I?ve got another song I?ll post in a week or two that is sort of a continuation.

    Thanks again.
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A tragic tale having sweet-sour memories, wishful desires to tie again, break apart and to be a stranger once more; enjoyed the read; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR


 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
    Thank you much. It is bittersweet, but this is life. There is a sort of beauty in it.
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I read this several times for rhythm. I can only imagine the tune to go with it. It's a popular subject for slow, sad songs. I like several of the allusions, like "after all that we've been through, just to be strangers again." Good luck with the contest.


 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
    Thank you for the review. If you?re interested I posted the YouTube link in the description. I don?t know how to hyperlink it.
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Iza Deleanu
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Love- hate, repeat or let it go and keep just the good memories and the perfect beginning: "

Strangers at first
You invited me in
You showed me your world
And the beauty within
We laughed and we loved
Had the time of our lives
It was almost enough
Almost enough" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.


 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
    Thank you.
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For the second time today you have sent me off to YouTube land. As a song I preferred this one. I guess i like rhyme in song and the chorus worked really well.


 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
    I super appreciate the YouTube view. Thanks for the review and for watching both videos.
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Wow, that's intense, Marilyn. And touching and beautiful. It sounds like a song. It sounds like many people's lives.
You capture the emotion of this failed love so well. Excellent poem!
No corrections or suggestions. It's just right.
Blessings,
Deb

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 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
    Thank you Deb.

reply by DeboraDyess on 10-Jul-2020
    And you weren't Marilyn! Too little sleep last night, too early up this orning. And I'm sticking to that story! lol.
    I did go to the YouTube page. It's a lovely song, of course. The lyrics are so great.
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