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I Still Remember


You are still in my heart

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Raul1
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I like how you structured this poem. It is a very good piece of poetry. Well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Very good work. I like it. Thanks for sharing!


 Comment Written 13-Jul-2020


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These words are so touching, and I truly believe that "Somewhere, in the other world she might see them." How sad to lose a loved one at such a young age. Keep writing. I'm sure your words comfort others.


 Comment Written 13-Jul-2020


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In a clear, simple voice you give shape and texture to these feelings of being left behind when a spouse passes away. There is that poignant loneliness, that need to carry on through these sad reflections. And it is not easy. Life is never the same again. estory


 Comment Written 13-Jul-2020


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Hello Jay,

What a beautiful tribute you have written about your wife.
I'm sure she had a big smile on her face as she read your lovely words.

I truly believe that she reads everything that you write. So, don't forget and write a poem about one of your old girlfriends from years gone by...LOL

Take care of yourself and keep writing...Bill


 Comment Written 13-Jul-2020


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Jaybird1,
Your poem is full of great images of sharing your
life with your wife, your chosen soul mate.
Your wife is witness to your writing and feels your
pain. Someday she will be your date at the table of the
Great Feast that the Lord will provide.
Thank you for sharing.
Peace and Joy,
Richie b


 Comment Written 12-Jul-2020


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Your Poem I Still Remember is beautifully written the rhyme scheme elevates the theme. I would suggest possibly adding a picture and changing the category from general

Well Done!


 Comment Written 12-Jul-2020


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Beautiful poem to your love. Apparently, we have both lost our loves.
I have nothing but loving memories of our sixty years together. My
big regret is her going and leaving me behind. Beautiful.


 Comment Written 12-Jul-2020


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What a sweet tribute to the love you both shared. A love like that cannot be measured by length of years, but depth of caring. It will always give you comfort to know you had something very special.


 Comment Written 12-Jul-2020


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Hello jaybird1,
Nice piece of poetry having smooth flow with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully working as a memorable tribute to the poet's beloved wife.
The 2nd stanza is particularly noteworthy.


 Comment Written 12-Jul-2020


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Elizabeth Emerald
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Poignant tribute--in excellent rhythm and fine rhyme--dream/stream--you tell a beautiful love story--thanks for the footnote for the details. Cheers. LIZ


 Comment Written 11-Jul-2020


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