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a Snow White Variation


the real story?

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Comment by
sibhus
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This an amusing alternative to your traditional fairy tale. Then again, Eveleth sounds like a typical snowflake and the brunt of dark forces in fairy tales. A fun read that kept the readers interest throughout. Thanks for sharing this fun little tale.


 Comment Written 12-Jul-2020


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Iza Deleanu
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So is there more? I really like how you started this story, maybe a continuation will give more clarity. ""Well, she didn't look too pretty to me."
"You came to the wrong place! I'm not the one you wanted!"
"Oh, yes you are, 'cause I always liked the way you just sat around, so you could stay nice and clean."
"That's because Cinderella did all the housework!"
"I don't know anything about Cinderella. All I know is I have been kind of a watching you."
"Oh, you are so stupid! You have me mixed up with Snow White, the Queen's step daughter!" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.


 Comment Written 12-Jul-2020


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