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Seashore Serenity


silent ripples of hurtful turmoil

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Irish Rain
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How lovely this is Miss Ronni!
I especially liked 'soul kissed
with no shore to claim' and 'like
gypsy dances'...so very poetic.
The picture is so yearning, it suits
this very well.
Just wonderful,
hope you are well!
Blessings...


 Comment Written 15-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
    Hi dear Irish Rain,
    Thank you for your appreciative comments and compliments on
    this one. Sea has always been a mesmerizing contemplation,
    muse always lingers there longest. Sure do miss the Ca.
    beaches! We're in a hot spell here of several 100 + days...
    Am doing fine, thank you for the kind wishes. Likewise, hope
    you are too.
    Love, blessings always, Ronni

reply by Irish Rain on 16-Jul-2020
    100+....WOW. I'd be surely dead. I drag in the 90's, ha ha...watermelon revives me!! Loved your poem, I love the sea too!! God bless and keep you!!
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Sitting by the water always has us in a reflective mood as the harsh realities of nature are juxtaposed with our life and finding peace can be an arduous task at times, an emotional write Ronni, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 14-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
    Hi dear Dolly,
    You are so right dear Dolly, the sea and gorgeous beaches have
    always been most mystifying and mesmerizing, and my muse's
    most favorite place for flow of memories and reflections to just
    roam free. And just plain relax!!! You aced it perfectly!
    Love, blessings, Ronni
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Humans spend a lifetime, short as it turns out to be, searching and hoping true happiness will find them. Yet that once or twice, we turn our backs on the sincere possibility, because we just aren't sure, it isn't the right time, situation, or we are afraid to give up a mediocre sure thing or security, abandoning every little boy and girl's dream. I spent a lifetime chasing all the things I thought were important, while missing out on all the things that really should have been. "Time waits for no one." And it's the one thing we can never get back. Great job! And thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 13-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
    Hi Ric,
    You cite a sad and sorry mistake and misconception so many
    people make due to so many time consuming indecisions,
    over cautions, fears and confusions and sobering latter day
    reckonings, often many years late, so pitifully lost and never
    retrievable. And at such a destructive personal loss and regret. A
    sobering reminder so insightfully conveyed!
    I truly hope, since your own personal awareness of such
    irony and loss, your choices, directions and discretions are
    more positive, rewarding and fulfilling in every way possible.
    Thank you, for your thoughtful, considerate and appreciative
    comments on this poem, and kindly sharing too.
    Very best wishes to you always! Ronni








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Very occasionally my mind has drifted, (which is silly really) dwelling on things that could have been handled better, but my silly nature and my ill conceived judgement led me in other directions. Beautifully written Ronni, this is a marvellous work, blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 13-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
    Hi dear Roy!!!!
    I do love your sense of humor friend, and you always find a way
    to make my heart smile and joys do backflips....LOL... Keeps
    me from getting too complacent haha.
    Love best wishes always, Ronni

reply by royowen on 14-Jul-2020
    I?ve learnt to not take myself too seriously, but it?s tough knowing God?s wisdom, and looking at the world?s wisdom, it wasn?t difficult to embrace God, In fact I?m a total fundamentalist and believer in the supposed bad and the good of God?s word, my dismay is that believers downsize God, which I think is saying that God is not able to be huge in stature. We get fixated by unimportant things. bless you, yes I can laugh at myself, God and I agree, I?m a fool, but a fool for God, I know you ?get it? so bless you Ronni.
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Your poem is quite melancholy, but I admired your subtitles for emphasis plus images like "gypsy dances" and "sand barred from any echo. The artwork you selected established the mood well. Continue to have a productive new week- Joan


 Comment Written 13-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
    Hi dear Joan,
    Thank you for your lovely and selectively appreciable comments
    and compliments on this one. The sea has always been a most
    mystic and mesmerizing solace and meditation for muse and
    memories and reflections that sometimes subtly plead to be
    allowed to flow in calming release.
    Thanks for the encouraging nudge...take care and have joyous
    week. Hugs, Ronni

reply by Joan E. on 15-Jul-2020
    Thank you for sharing your connection with the sea. Keep enjoying the solace and inspiration. More hugs- Joan
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There is something so touchingly moving about this poem. It has a mysterious quality too, that somehow tugs at the heartstrings and makes one wonder about what has caused the hurt. I love the ocean references and your beautiful painting enhances the mysterious mood. This is, truly, a work of art ... musical, mystical words full of emotional impact. Thank you for the pleasure of reading this.


 Comment Written 13-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
    Thank you dear Miss Merri,
    for such a lovely and marvelous array of comments and compliments
    on this one, and especially that you enjoyed it so!!! That is even
    added reward to the very generous 6th star dear friend!
    Your inspiration and friendship still admirably dwells and lingers with me from when we first joined FS and got acquainted and
    connected as friends through the years. I wish I had more
    time to read more of yours, and even if I don't get to comment
    on them, I do still read and marvel at them....and your Poetry
    book! Surely there is another book due soon from you???
    Love, blessings, Ronni
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Hi Ronnie.
I like the way you blended the ocean with love.
And, I just wrote a piece.
Also about love and kisses but a lot longer.
A Love poem about my love for the Sea.
Entitled,
"She Waves for Me"
...
This was well written and Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well, and flowed Well.
Well?
With No Grammar Issues, as well!
...
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents?
Well both Excellent and Exceptional.
While, Descriptive Measures Aligned?
Per-Sea-Ly!?
Ricky


 Comment Written 13-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
    Thank you Ricky,
    for a truly comprehensive and appreciative range of comments
    and compliments! Sincerely appreciated. I note we are both
    sea lovers, so will take a peek at your "She Waves At Me" post.
    Thanks too for the extra star!!! Gratefully noted!
    Best wishes always, Ronni




reply by Ricky1024 on 14-Jul-2020
    My next piece did I send out "Eileen's Dream?"
    Is even better!
    Thanks,
    Ricky
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I ache for another six to give my robber of sixes! I tease... I give them gladly. Your work is par excel-lance!
Just arrived back from the shore and contemplations. The shore is always wanting for the creamy, foam bath. It misses the tide when she leaves, much like the chance you describe here.

Superb as always and beautifully formatted and illustrated, dear Ronni.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxos..........


 Comment Written 13-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
    Hi dear Sally,
    Not to fret my dear, you are always a '6' whenever you arrive always
    with such gracious and generous comments and compliments!
    That is the best reward and inspiration always dear!!!
    Keep enjoying that beach, and have a marvelous week!
    Love, blessings, Ronni
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tides, with a force that is uncontrollable, yet a survival act of nature. mesmerizing, tantalizing, fearful. my favorite lines; winds of rising tide achingly soul kissed, with no shore to claim. brilliant

lulube


 Comment Written 13-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
    Hi Lulube,
    Welcome treat and surprise dear to have you peek in!!! I am so
    pleased you enjoyed this one, sea has always been my most
    solace and meditation resource, for happy memories and sometimes for sad times and reflections good for the heart
    and soul to flow, like a tide out to sea.
    Hope all has been well with you and are safe and well.
    Thanks again for the thoughtful and complimentary comments!
    Blessings, best wishes, Ronni

reply by Lulube on 24-Jul-2020
    welcome, the sea holds a big part of my life as well, it is a part of us all yet most forget to take in the power of the flowing water

    lulube
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