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a cinquain

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The scars of much life in those them there floors, many lifetimes of activity, love and sorrow hidden beneath, I enjoyed the sentiments here Bill, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 16-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
    Thank you, Dolly
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What a short heartfelt poem! It is easy to read and understand, and I felt the raw message all the way through. Wonderful! Best of luck in the contest!


 Comment Written 15-Jul-2020



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    Thank you, TT
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Bill, such a beautiful, unique poem. I am just wondering which came first, the photo or the poem. If some man had said your words to me when I was much younger, I would have fallen in love with his originality alone,
Excellent work, Bill.
Best wishes.


 Comment Written 14-Jul-2020



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    Thank you, Cindy. That?s a very kind and flattering review.
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Ooh. Creepy. Cleverly developed, your cinquain. I never expected the last two lines. This reads well. I don't see how any entry could beat this.


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    Thank you for the good thought, Shari
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Oh, how sinister! You take us from an innocent description of a large, well-built floor space to a guilty secret of concealed murder. The loaded use of the culminating "my love" reveals the perpetrator. A well told story in poetic form.


 Comment Written 14-Jul-2020



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    Thank you, LisaMay
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Hello :)
This is a great concoction of abstract, macabre and intrigue!
It conforms to the requirements of the contest and I enjoyed it very much.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra


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    Thank you, Debra
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Wow -- now there's a completely dark scenario painted for your reader in but those limited 22 syllables - great job! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)


 Comment Written 14-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
    Thank you, Yvette
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Well, the burial place has been confessed. Hopefully, you will turn yourself in. A wickedly fun post and entry for the Cinquain poetry contest. Best of luck!
Sal :)


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    Thanks, Sally
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