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The Bible condensed into a poem

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Comment by
Melodie Michelle
 
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This was a good poem that could've gone with another go over and tweak!

The words didn't flow as nicely as they should've but that's easily fixed;-)

I appreciate you and thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)


 Comment Written 22-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
    Thanks for the review and encouragement. I assure you I have spent hours upon hours trying to smoothen this without losing any of its substance. I'd gladly welcome some pointers ,when you say it's an easy fix. ( Without losing substance) Blessings


reply by Melodie Michelle on 22-Jul-2020
    I would rather you go through it and tell it bc I'm not wanting it lose substance either and worth your doing it, it won't lose that.

    ;-)

reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
    Yeah, I'm sure I'll go through it a couple more dozen times, it's a labor of love, and I see it's rhythmic flaws, but it's getting there, a little closer with each rewrite. Bless you
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Michael Ludwinder
 
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Very nicely done. I love the emotion that pours from your poem. This was a creative write with a surprisingly well done use of story telling despite the limited format of the poem. Great job.


 Comment Written 22-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
    Thank you for reviewing this and appreciating it. I have spent many many hours honing it, and will some more I'm sure. Blessings.
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