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The Bible condensed into a poem

  2 total reviews 
Comment by
Melodie Michelle
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This was a good poem that could've gone with another go over and tweak!

The words didn't flow as nicely as they should've but that's easily fixed;-)

I appreciate you and thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
    Thanks for the review and encouragement. I assure you I have spent hours upon hours trying to smoothen this without losing any of its substance. I'd gladly welcome some pointers ,when you say it's an easy fix. ( Without losing substance) Blessings

reply by Melodie Michelle on 22-Jul-2020
    I would rather you go through it and tell it bc I'm not wanting it lose substance either and worth your doing it, it won't lose that.


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
    Yeah, I'm sure I'll go through it a couple more dozen times, it's a labor of love, and I see it's rhythmic flaws, but it's getting there, a little closer with each rewrite. Bless you
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Michael Ludwinder
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Very nicely done. I love the emotion that pours from your poem. This was a creative write with a surprisingly well done use of story telling despite the limited format of the poem. Great job.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
    Thank you for reviewing this and appreciating it. I have spent many many hours honing it, and will some more I'm sure. Blessings.
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