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Free Verse Club - tunnel

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Gert sherwood
 
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Raff you free verse poem for the Club
the tunnel that your Goal is great. I like the way you describe when you are looking for the end of the tunnel, smiles you will see light.
Gert


 Comment Written 19-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
    You are very kind in your review. Thank you.
    Ralf

reply by Gert sherwood on 19-Jul-2020
    You are welcome Ralf
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Yes, there always is light at the end of the tunnel, but going through a dark tunnel day after day is depressing. I'm thinking of the virus as I write this. Trying not to be too negative. Hugs, Lou


 Comment Written 17-Jul-2020



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    I see what you mean. Let's hope we reach the light soon.

    Thank you for your review.
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I can visualize you looking through that tunnel! Front and center before your eyes. Uplifting message that persistence will pay off eventually. Cheers. LIZ


 Comment Written 16-Jul-2020



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    Thanks for your review, Elizabeth.
    Ralf
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This is an interesting interpretation of the prompt for the club, Raff. I enjoyed reading it. I like how you describe how your life is and has been leading up to the goal of the light at the end of the tunnel. Your picture choice is a great way to show/compare the strategy of winning a football game with your life.
Thanks for sharing,
Respectfully, Jan


 Comment Written 16-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
    Thank you for this very detailed review. I do appreciate your words.
    Ralf
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I am reminded of a saying, Man with out a vision will not succeed. So glad you see the light, sometimes it flickers off and on but always a light.
Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 16-Jul-2020



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    Thank you for your words in this review. I do appreciate the feedback.
    I'm thinking of another phrase "Keep your eye on the ball."
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I enjoyed reading this positive free verse very much, Ralf. It offers a sound example of how to approach difficulties in the best way to achieve a positive life. We all have problems of one kid or another, and it helps to look toward the end goal that shines brightly with holy light. :-) Janet


 Comment Written 16-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
    Yes, thank you. Never take your eye off the ball. Your words are encouraging.
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This free verse poem speaks to the advantage of having a goal and the determination to pursue it. A person will almost always succeed if the stay the course and believe in themselves. In their mine, they can see there is light at the end of the tunnel.


 Comment Written 16-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
    They can never lose sight of that final goal or they will falter. Determination is the key. It is something we have learned through hard lessons in life and we should never forget it.
    Thank you for your detailed review which is very encouraging.
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I like the optimism in this. It's so encouraging to think there's light at the end of the tunnel. We may not see it right now, but we can only hope to find a glimmer. You describe what it takes--persistence and keeping your goal in front of. This is very lyrical, and it reminds me that we can get through our present troubles if we don't give up. judi


 Comment Written 16-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
    Hopefully we will adjust to new circumstances with innovative ideas and energy. Thank you for your review. It is so satisfying to hear from others.
    Ralf

reply by judiverse on 17-Jul-2020
    You're welcome. After the virus, I don't think we'll ever be the same, so we'll have to adjust. judi
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A great inspirational poem and much needed today. I have so much before me as we all do. It's important to reach for the goals set before us each day.
Sending you my best today as always, and blessings in Christ,
Sal xoxo


 Comment Written 16-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
    Thank you Sally. It is good to get your view on a poem.
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