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Trying to give hope and inspiration

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This poem is REALLY well-written, vividly descriptive of a lovely, pure heart, and inspirational. What better objective could a poet have than to encourage and uplift others?


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That is a true writer, writing till we can't write any more. This piece speaks to all of us who take pen to paper to express how we feel and how we see and interpret the world around us.


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I don't understand lines 3 and 4. Are you saying peace and joy can bring the expensive thingsyou can not afford? That's what it sounds like, and that's jarring. Maybe try:

I can't afford expensive things,
but long for what peace and joy brings.

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Jaybird,
What a lovely poem! I am glad you found the passion for poetry. Your poems are full of life. My father is 94, I wish he could write poetry.
You have seen a lifetime of things, there is so much more for you to write about. I look forward to your poems.
Best wishes, good luck in all your writing endeavors.
Cindy


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Wonderful! Thank you so much, Jaybird, for writing these poems. You do inspire us and give us encouragement. What a beautiful thing to use your gifts this way. Congratulations again for being the Recognized Writer!


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It is so nice to see that you are keeping your wit and lighthearted feelings in good shape. Please keep up your poetry as long as you can --it is very enjoyable always and much appreciated.
All the Best!

Phil


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That is when I get my best inspiration. Most of the time one line I build a poem around and you are so right. That is the best time to write a poem, Bill. Well done my friend. Nancy:)


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That is so true. When words penned have meaning for both the writer and the reader, it is the most wonderful feeling! We certainly hope you will continue to inspire us with your poetry for a long time to come. Poetry gives us a haven in which to retreat from the craziness in the world these days!


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Jaybird, this is fitting for your style. I always find myself enjoying your poems--you have a knack, a way with words that speaks volumes. As always, this is nicely done.


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May I Write For You?
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Hello Mr Jay

I sometimes wake up thinking about a poem I wrote it down. Writing poetry is a lot of fun. Thank you very much for sharing words of wisdom.

Gypsy

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