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Words can be heart warming

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"The righ word at the right time..." I agree with the sentiment, but sometimes those words are loss in the center of my mind. I like the most your your first line "I use my words like paint and brush..." You are showing, no telling. Superb.


 Comment Written 23-Jul-2020


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Great rhymes here. I love the color of the background - a great choice that compliments the poem. This is a very inspirational poem. Very tight - no revisions needed for sure! Well done!


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Jaybird1, I think that this a simple although very thoughtful poem. It isn't easy to write such a poem wherein one attempts to rhyme. Well, you achieved it. Good on you.
I really like the line, "I use my words like paint and brush."
Keep on keeping on.
E. Shields


 Comment Written 23-Jul-2020


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Hello jaybird1, beautiful sentiments - soft, delicate, and filled with wisdom and truth. I especially liked:

If you find yourself feeling low
and life for you has lost it's glow,
grab pen and paper, that's the way
to raise your hopes and light your day.

Silky rhyming. This is a poem that makes the reader say ahh, and leaves one with a smile. Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing.

LateBloomer




 Comment Written 22-Jul-2020


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I agree that writing for me, answers questions, determines the answers, almost as if I've captured life's meaning my soul, my spirit, my essence, whatever the part of this tent that stores wisdom, beautifully written my friend in wonderful rhyming and tetrametric stanzas, well done, blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 22-Jul-2020


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I loved reading this uplifting poem. Your poem flows nicely and has a pleasant rhythm. You effectively describe how writing helps you through life. Many fellow writers can identify with this sentiment. This type of poem is especially necessary during these trying times. I loved your word choices. Your rhymes work perfectly and nothing is forced. Thank you for sharing your work. I enjoyed reading it.


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A beautiful poem. Great rhythm throughout and I loved the descriptive of "paint and brush". To paint one's words is indeed what we strive for. Thank you for sharing!


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An excellent and most upbeat poem, Jay. Your metre and rhyme spot on and the theme one of fact.

Not everything we write needs to be profound and deep and sometimes just noticing the faces in the flowers is enough to light one's way.

A most enjoyable read and many thanks for sharing.

Gloria


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The words of this poem are inspiring, filled with meaning, and are
creative. I found this poem has great advise and a beautiful message.
The poem is also uplifting and flows and connects well.
Have a great day!


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This is such a lovely rhyming poem with a wonderful cadence. It flowed so easily and holds a true message. Words have always been a balm to me in troubled times, whether I'm writing or reading them. Thank you for sharing.


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