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Words can be heart warming

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Wise words conveyed in this particular piece, appreciated by those who write more, enduring them the scratch and the rush of presenting a viewpoint worthy of statement. I found all these valued aspects in this read. All views stated in my opinion.


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A very well-written poem about uplifting not only yourself but also the reader or listener when we use words that draw them to the brighter side of life where they can see the sun is still shining behind the clouds.


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Great! So true, words can mean so much to others. Your words can put a smile on someone's face or bring a tear of unhappiness or pain. Your poem is easy reading and the subject is very clear. Thanks for sharing!
Patty


 Comment Written 22-Jul-2020


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You have nicely captured how the words released on paper help uplift your soul. Fine use of personification! Excellent use of similes. Consistent meter and fine rhyming make the flow fluid.


 Comment Written 22-Jul-2020


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Jaybird,
I love your poem. First, I like your play on words"human race" as people and as a race in time.
Your rhymes really flow. I am going to bookmark your poem so I can read it when I'm experiencing a dry spell in writing.
Good luck with all your writing.
Best wishes,
Cindy. ???


 Comment Written 22-Jul-2020


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Another beautiful poem of yours. I like the simplicity of your structure and how nicely it rhymes and flows, almost like floating on the quiet ocean. I am new to poetry, but each time I read yours, I like it a lot and I am drawn to your style.


 Comment Written 22-Jul-2020


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It's a lovely message within a well expressed 'ars poetica' piece that defines what writing means to you and urges others to use their creativity to lift their spirit.
You explain that you are painting many facets of the human experience with your poems, then you go into the function of poetry (truth searching, etc) that ultimately gives you joy. It ends with an advice:
"If you find yourself feeling low
and life for you has lost it's glow,
grab pen and paper, that's the way
to raise your hopes and light your days.

Lovely, relatable, wise piece!


 Comment Written 22-Jul-2020


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Jaybird, This is a very nice and well written poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and words can be warming and make someone's day. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri


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"The pen is mightier than the sword." I totally agree with your poem. Walk away from the computer, sit, contemplate, put pen to paper and just BE!.


 Comment Written 21-Jul-2020


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When my son died in a car wreck, since I was a newspaper columnist, my pastor invited me to chronicle my grief through a monthly piece in our church newsletter. It was the most therapeutic thing I did during that first year of grief. Writing, getting it down on paper (Or a screen) definitely helps you see where you are and move beyond.


 Comment Written 21-Jul-2020


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