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I will always remember

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A lovely poem Jake. In today's world, we can all relate whether we have lost a loved one or if we just can't see them due to this pandemic.

Beautiful sentiment.

Well done.
Blessings
Janet


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First, congratulations on being recognized and on being named one of the all time best. I found that your poem flowed very smoothly. It brought a tear to my eye, because it reminded me of my husband who I lost ten months ago. Thanks for sharing.


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Hello Jay,

This is a very touching poem but so true. When we lose the only true love in our lives nothing is ever the same again.

But it eventually will be when we take our heavenly flight and join them once again in Paradise.

Take care...Bill


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Hello Jaybird :)
This is a beautiful poem.
Sweetly sentimental and full of love for your one true love, it flows with a smooth and even meter with a perfect aabb rhyme scheme.
I like how the last 2 lines are a modified version of the first 2 lines - very effective.
Best wishes, Debra :)


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Hello jaybird1, your poem is filled with great sensory appeal and has soft and romantic imagery.

I especially liked:
So ever sweet, so ever kind,
I'll never free you from my mind.

Silky rhyming. Your love shines throughout the verses. This poem made me sigh and left me with a smile. Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer







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Today really is the day for good poetry. It must have been the weekend. There is so much quality today. And I'm certain you must be the best 95 year old poet today. To me, this piece expresses the true meaning of love and from the sound of it I assume it was a long term love. In reading this, you have made my day better


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Oh, Jay, this beautiful poem brought tears to my eyes. Yes, may she just come back to you one more time. Wouldn't that be wonderful? But one thing is for sure. One day you'll be reunited with your beloved wife in another entity all together. Ulla:)))


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Beautiful, but so sad. The words and rhymes are exciting to read. I do so enjoy reading your poems, Jaybird. I never get tired of them.

Thanks for sharing this piece of you with us.


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This is lovely. Whoever this was written for must be very special, it's a nice tribute. It rhymes beautifully and flows easily. Thanks for sharing your talent.


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You'll always have her in your heart, Jaybird, and she'll always be with you in spirit, taking that walk with you. We all go at different times, no one knows why things happen, they just do. Knowing we'll meet again, helps us to move on a little. I have more loved ones in Heaven now, than I have on Earth. I think I'm next in line in my family. :)) Well done, my friend, this was a lovely poem, beautifully written. :) Sandra xx


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