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never alone

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crzypnter
 
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Hello Ronnie,
This is one of those poems that one can sit and ponder on as they stare up at the nights moon with wispy clouds passing by. But for me, being a son of Christ,I am reassured that I'm never alone or unloved, and we all live under that same moon that He so graciously provides to light our way in the dark. Thank you for sharing this one mdf God bless
August


 Comment Written 29-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
    Hi August,
    You are so right on in all your comments and reflections, and the
    always loved reassurance you spiritually live and abide in cannot
    be equaled or surpassed in any other way or anything but through
    Christ and His Word. I firmly believe and abide by that too. This
    is one of those experimental drifts my muse sometimes just
    ventures off too every now and then. Thanks for appreciating.
    Best wishes always, Ronni
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A very well-written poem about feeling alone and unloved we may feel like solved howling to the moon for just a bit of attention, or like yearning clouds covering the moon for some of its light.


 Comment Written 29-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
    Hi Sandra,
    You aced this one so perfectly dear Sandra. I am pleased you
    enjoyed and shared your perfectly perceptive reflections.
    Hope you have a gorgeous day, and staying well in these
    trying times; and always loved, be it daylight or moonlight!
    Blessings, best wishes, Ronni
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Wow -- you've said a helluvalot here, my lady... I especially like that second stanza there: circling and brushing past each other, never noticing the other/never acknowledging the other's presence/feelings/perspective. Just 'clouds' focused on something in the distance yet existing in solitude and feeding only on the 'emotions' we make of our own out of what we 'read' online.... where is true 'civilization'?? Thanx so much for the metaphor, Lady Ronni... may we find each other again. :) ;) ;) Yvette


 Comment Written 29-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
    Hi dear Yvette,
    Thank you for a truly amazing and most appreciated comments
    and reflections on this....aced it so perfectly & like you read it
    right off my mind...your introspections are indeed most stunning
    and encompassing so much there and beyond from so many
    intricate perspectives and insights!
    Ah my dear, I am indeed behind with reviews of yours...and
    I truly apologize dear. Last one I tried to do on yours, got
    surprise vacationing company from out of state...plus a
    disruptive couple of incidents, both on and off FS (check my
    EM quick update on this to your EM) can explain more there.
    We indeed will be finding each other again...missed you and
    just need to clear off a few things to be able to do that again.
    Thanks for hanging in there with my tardiness dear...you
    indeed are most special and endeared...always...(:) (;) (;) !!!!!!
    Love, blessings always,!!!!!! Ronni


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Our perceptions can at times be misguided and we must never assume anything in life as we are often surprised that we are not alone and we often loved very much, food for thought here, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 29-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
    Hi Dolly,
    Right you are dear Dolly! Best surprise to discover or feel,
    as we so often either dismiss or take it for granted. Have
    a beautiful day, beautiful lady, and always loved, day or nigh!
    Love, blessings, Ronni
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Such a meaningful poem. It's easy to feel like we are often alone so it's great to get a kind reminder that we are not. Thank you so much for sharing


 Comment Written 28-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
    Hi Mila,
    Thank you for your most perceptive and appreciative thoughts
    and comments on this poem. I am so pleased you found it
    meaningful and also reassuring reminder that we are not always
    entirely alone. My pleasure to share, and most grateful for
    your kind thoughts and sharing in return. Have a gorgeous day!
    Best wishes, Ronni
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You certainly put our emotions in perspective, between the comparison to "wolves" and "clouds". Yes, there is only one moon and a limited amount of moonlight! Your picture selection is the perfect reinforcement. Cheers- Joan


 Comment Written 28-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
    Hello dear Joan,
    Thank you for your perceptive and reflective appreciations on
    this one, and glad you enjoyed the presentation and picture
    theme. And thanks ever so much for the added star! Appreciated!
    Hugs, Ronni
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This is a very nice poem, I enjoyed reading it. The imagery is very powerful and I love the wolf similes. The contrast of the two kids works really well. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day


 Comment Written 28-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
    Hello Oliver,
    Thank you for your enjoyment in reading this poem, and kind
    compliments on its composition and presentation. That is the
    true reward when a reader enjoys and appreciates the poem
    so conscientiously, and your obliging rating.
    May you too have a most marvelous day too!
    Very best wishes always, Ronni
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This has a lovely depth to it.
One could get quite lost in its
beautiful simplicity.
Even though we feel alone,
so do others, usually right
in our vicinity.
So, we never truly are.
Love the haunting quality
Miss Ronni,
beautiful,
blessings...


 Comment Written 28-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
    Hello dear Irish Rain,
    Thank you for your most gracious and generous comments and
    appreciations on this dear, and perceptive reflections. And
    no less so for the dear extra star!
    Love, blessings always, Ronni

reply by Irish Rain on 28-Jul-2020
    You're most welcome!! Have a great Wednesday!!
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Just beautiful, Ronni dear, in your unique style I have come to love. We are all blanketed by the same heavens, awaiting for loneliness to lift. I never feel truly alone n the moonlight. God is there with me.
Sending you my best today as always for this lovely offering,
Sally xoxo's.....


 Comment Written 28-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
    Thank you dear Sally, for your uplifting comments and
    compliments, and such faithful appreciations of me and my
    writings! You've aced the message, theme and essence of
    this poem ever so perfectly, and I am most touched indeed.
    Love, blessings always, Ronni



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Your poem has a nice feel to it. The theme is good, and the presentation is as well. The upper and lower case selection for beginning lines seems inconsistent. But I am no expert. With the use of sometimes, it doesn't convey any hope. Perhaps another word more reassuring? Great potential here though.


 Comment Written 28-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
    Few of us are experts, and poets and writers learn by their
    lacks or errors. Thus, I thank you for your candid comments
    and perceptions.
    Ronni
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