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Cleansing believers for Jesus' sake

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You offer the reader a challenge. To go and read and hopefully take in this undoughting believe that there is someone out there and he is waiting for us.


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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
    Thank you! Yes, Christ is indeed waiting and calling us to Himself. We have a limited time to respond.
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The Psalms are my favorite book of the Bible. I feel close to God when I read them. I like your discussion of Jesus washing people's feet, it is a cleansing ritual that shows our sins can be washed away. Your essay teaches the reader.


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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
    Thak you! Blessed Jesus!
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It's a bit early in the morning. But I know swallowing scripture in the past has prepared my soul for writing, because it needs to be part of us. But your right, regularly reading is important, but I've tried reading large tracts, but I'd rather absorb by repetitive chewing of the passage I'm on, it lasts, like the retentionp, of my arithmetical rote learning, beautifully written Bro Denis, b


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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
    Thanks brother, I agree as Spurgeon once said,
    "Butterflies cover more ground, but bees gather more honey."
    I find it helpful, however to sometimes do a fly-over (or a large portion of it) of this wonderful book God has given us. God bless you, dear brother Roy, God's poet extrodinare! YBIC, Dennis

reply by royowen on 28-Jul-2020
    Bless you Bro, I?m a small eater, heh heh.

reply by royowen on 28-Jul-2020
    Thanks bro,
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Interesting take on the water and blood. What you said about the song, "What can wash away my sin, nothing but the blood..." I would think it is related to the verse, I think in John 1:9 But I think your on to something about how the water and blood represent for us a cleansing, and there is indeed much scripture about the cleansing power of God's Word. Good work.

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 Comment Written 28-Jul-2020



reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
    Thanks Forest. There is teaching through out the Word on this very subject. And though I've hear many sermons on the Humility didplayed by Jesus in washing feet, it's a rare one which looks into Christ's Words of explanation: "Except I wash you, you have NO PART in Me." Christ makes it clear in the passage the Apostles are already cleansed by the blood (with the exception of Judas who never came to faith in Christ). This washing with water from the laver in front of the tent of meeting was done by the Priests right after they had offerred a burnt sacrifice on the altar. Only after washing with water did they then go into the tent and worship God.

    God bless, brother! Dennis

reply by forestport12 on 28-Jul-2020
    Amen
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