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The Road Most Taken


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Another thoughtful and well written sonnet. The Robert Frost genre is beautifully written with a compassionate message.

Very well done.
Blessings
Janet


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Hello Jaybird,

I pray you are doing well. This is a beautiful Sonnet form-aka Robert Frost poem. I always loved Robert Frost poem, " A Road Most Taken." This is a beautiful poem of the road you have taken. We all have to travel our journey in life. I really enjoyed your poem. Beautifully written with so much compassion. Nicely done. I always love how you make your words rhyme. Take care and happy future writing:-)



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Nice one, Jaybird. Once again you have absolutely cracked it with this wonderful thought provoking and excellently rhymed poem. Cheers. Jen.


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Another of your unique iambic tetrameter sonnets. Well done. I like the allusion to "the road less taken." Your poem is very different from Frost's, but the connection is clear, and the contrast between the two is so interesting. Well done.


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Jaybird: my sentiments, exactly! I'll be 72 this month. My mind wanders around my past years and lands on so many memories. Some are good, some are bad, some are mistakes made and some are achievements. It has been a long road, indeed, but zoomed by way too quickly. Keep safe. Linda


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Always enjoy your wonderful poetry my friend, in simple down to earth vocabulary, you pen superb poems that are a joy to read; always excellent in rhymes and great flow; I thank you for sharing.


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Beautiful reflection on the path you've taken...I can certainly see the general theme of "The Road Not Taken" interspersed here. In the end all we can hope is we've kept moving, walked the good walk, and pleased our God along the way.--Karenina


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Very good cover of the Frost version, Jay. I again am very impressed with your talent, my friend. I liked these lines in particular:

"The road seemed long, so far to go,
appeared so tiresome, painful, slow.

: ) Bob


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The issue of people and time is complicated. Young people want time to hurry up so their dreams can be realized. Finally, time is drawing to an end and people reflect on missed opportunities of the hurried past. Your poem is like all your other poems--well-written, deeply meaningful, and touching.


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This is a very lovely write. My favorite lines are;This life is short, though it is grand-
Seek in your search that promised land. It says to me considering the rest of the poem we should not forget our spirituality.

Looking at your profile you are 95, or soon will be, and so I assume this is biographical considering what you wrote. I hope if I reach your age, that I'll have it together like you.


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