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The Road Most Taken


Sonnet form-aka Robert Frost

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This is a nice, calming piece. Though there is a touch of sadness, there is also a comfort in having lived a good life. Great work on this piece, thank you for sharing. Later daze.


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Definitely written in the vein of Robert Frost! I love the trip your poem takes us on. Vivid words that bring your poem alive. Thanks for sharing this with us.


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* Love the words to your poem you captured my attention from the first word to the last.
I could feel your emotion in every line Stay strong until next time.
Cookie


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Other than misspelling July, this is awesome. The Road Not Taken by Robert Frost remains my favorite and Ive not regretted it either. A fine one in blue formatting.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo


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Thank you for these encouraging words, Jaybird! Appreciate you sharing because I know you have walked this road which "seemed long, so far to go" but you have won those battles and encourage us to do the same. Blessings to you!


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This poem shows the loneliness of old age. It's hard when all friends and family is gone. Even children or nieces and nephews. I recognized the title as a take off of Frost. This is a good rewriting of it.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan


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Well said. Early on in our lives, there seems to be an infinite amount of time ahead of us, and anxious are we to reach some nebulous goals, accompanied by close companions. In the twilight of our days, we see that that the journey was shorter than we thought, and that we are ultimately on our own (at least in this world).

One small edit you may want to consider:
"with never anytime to waste" I think you mean (any time).
Dick


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Yes the road we take can be long if we let it or you can pretend it is a test Hod has set forth for you to find your own way in the world like Robert Frost


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I hear a message to never stop looking for that which you strice to find. There is a journey awaiting you in this world if you only care enough to travel the road to find it.


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a life lived to the fullest and with no regrets, and at the end if it seems that you are not alone , you are not - God is there :"This life is short, though it is grand-
Seek in your search that promised land' Thank you for sharing.


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