Contact Us | En español    
         Join today or login

Status

New Here?
Sign Up
Fast! Three Questions.

Already a member?
Login

Contests

Share A Story In A Poem
Deadline: Dec 1st

2-4-2 Poetry
Deadline: Dec 2nd

Nonet Poetry Contest
Deadline: Dec 4th

True Story Flash
Deadline: Dec 7th

5-7-5 Poetry
Deadline: Dec 10th


Writing Classes

0 classes available. Click here locate a class and to learn more.

Rank

Poet: None
Author: None
Novel: None
Reviewer:None
Votes: None






Reviews from
The Road Most Taken


Sonnet form-aka Robert Frost

  59 total reviews 
Comment by
thaities, Rebecca V.
Premier Author
Premier Reader
 
Poet Rating
 
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  7
Author Rating For Novels
  Rank:  12
Review Stars
  Rank:  11
 

#7 Ranked Author
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Even though we may live to be a hundred, life is short when looking at the big picture. We came from the promise land, and if we live correctly we will make the full circle and return from whence we came.


 Comment Written 31-Jul-2020


Comment by
Sandra du Plessis
Premier Author
Premier Reader
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  7
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  98
Author Rating For Novels
 
Review Stars
  
 Rank:  3
 

#7 Ranked Poet

#3 Ranked Reviewer
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
A very well-written sonnet about the road mout taken in your life with memories of those who left your side along the way. Now alone our journey will end when we find that the promised land.


 Comment Written 31-Jul-2020


Comment by
rhymelord
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  537
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Dear Jay,
Great execution of the format and a story that is oh so valid to us oldies. My wife and I are the "last men standing" of our group of friends. We walked a great road through life with them and at least we now have the memories - so important to cling to those.
Regards
Reg


 Comment Written 31-Jul-2020


Comment by
zanya
Premier Author
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  91
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  64
Author Rating For Novels
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  59
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Some beautiful sentiments here expressed especially 'When gazing at life's setting sun/regrets are few with battles won '- who can argue with that thought ?


 Comment Written 31-Jul-2020


Comment by
Jannypan (Jan)
Premier Author
Premier Reader
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  3
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  17
Author Rating For Novels
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  11
 

#3 Ranked Poet
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
I enjoyed your 'take' on RFrost's original. Your lines read smooth with good rhymes and great imagery. You did a great job making this personal.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan


 Comment Written 31-Jul-2020


Comment by
Y. M. Roger
FantasyGirl
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  5
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  9
Author Rating For Novels
  Rank:  21
Script Rating
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  7
 

#9 Ranked Author

#5 Ranked Poet
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Barreling forward recklessly toward the promised land -- what a wonderful premise for your sonnet, Jaybird!! Thank you so very much for sharing, sir! ;)


 Comment Written 31-Jul-2020


Comment by
Gypsy Blue Rose
Premier Author
Premier Reader
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  9
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Author Rating For Novels
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  16
 

#9 Ranked Poet
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
The Road Most Taken
by jaybird1

Hello, Mr Jay,

I like your version of the Road Not Taken. Great sonnet form...it sounds good. I know what you mean...time goes by faster and faster the older we get.


 Comment Written 31-Jul-2020


Comment by
Laurie Holding
Premier Author
Premier Reader
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  382
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  228
Author Rating For Novels
 
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
I loved this! I'm also a huge fan of Frost; wrote a sonnet to him that won a couple of prizes, one in Writer's digest. Maybe I'll post it so you can read it. At all costs, this poem of yours struck an important chord in me about time and life and appreciation. Well done!


 Comment Written 31-Jul-2020


Comment by
June Sargent
Premier Author
Premier Reader
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  17
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  53
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Frost's poem is beautiful - as is yours! Roads we take in life, as well as those not taken - as we get older, we do ponder over our choices. Hopefully, without too many regrets. Relish the memories.

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.


 Comment Written 31-Jul-2020


  Previous Page  2 3 4 5  -6-   Next Page 


Market your book.
Advertising options.
Football Chapter 5 part 1
A mother faces life's struggles.


Share or Bookmark
  Contact Us | En español | Advertise With Us

© 2015 FanStory.com, Inc. All Rights Reserved. Terms under which this service is provided to you. Privacy