You speak the truth here, my friend. The rhymes are perfection and the principal stands to be self-evident. As always, great writing. One small thing if you care to make the correction. Here: "we some time" Shouldn't this be "we sometimes."
Excellent writing Jay with all the ups and downs and life's obstacles can be overcome to where we all are today. I guess if we are all still here and later in life we have done quite well. Cheers and thanks for sharing.
Finally, a poet who remembered to capitalized and punctuate his poem. Pet peeve of mine.
Anyway I loved this poem. At first I thought it was about the hardships we experienced this year but this is how it is with everyday life, even if we don't see it. Thanks for the reminder.
I think that you wrote a great and inspiring poem. It was well written. It definitely describes the difficult road of life. It shows how important having a good friend is. My favorite line is "Give it your best, as you pursue
and harmony will follow you." It's so true. All you can so is try your best. Thanks for sharing and God Bless You.
-I appreciate your note
and your poem, jaybird.
-A well written poem that
shows various aspects
of life's journey-sometimes
it's good, and sometimes
-It is important to listen
"to your inner voice" and
to try and do your best each day.
I guess I was blessed, I have five lifetime friends. They stuck with me through thick and thin. Two of them, I'm sad to say, have passed, and a third one is on his death bed. Sometimes we don't realize how blessed we are until too late. Very good job on this poem. Stay well, my friend.