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Humming Into Autumn


Whisking away all heated stalla

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palmart
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Great Poem, Ronni!! Your writing brings colours that were at the back of our memory and have some poetry in their pronunciation:

ocher, vermilion, crimson, amber, scarlet, bright orange

Animated artwork fills of life your vivid poem! Good job!


 Comment Written 25-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
    Thank you for your kind and thoughtful thoughts and comments
    on this, so pleased you enjoyed it. Appreciate the peek into
    my previous write, and taking time to share your insightful
    appreciation. Sorry for delayed reply, freak ice storms here have
    caused power outages in our area here.
    Take care, thanks again, and God Bless!
    Best always, Ronni

reply by palmart on 29-Oct-2020
    It is a real pleasure to read you, Ronni! You´re very welcome and I really appreciate your kind words. Not a problem at all for the delay! I understand that ice storms brings consequences, sometimes not friendly ones... I lived in NY for some time... But now, below the Equator, days are longer and temperature is rising (hopefully).

    Have a wonderul day, month...Life!

    God Bless you!
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Ric Myworld
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Oh, fall is beautiful as bees buzz for sugar, varmints, animals and kids included, rustle in the leaves. But we mustn't forget that fall leads to allergies and snotty noses, followed by winter and blowing snow to freeze our toes. Unless, we stick close to the fireplace with hot chocolate and marshmallows in hand. Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 11-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
    Hi Ric,
    True it is, that there may be no perfect fall for everyone, and you
    do indeed note some of the most frustrating and unpleasant
    aspects of fall for many, yet still, each person's attitude or appreciation of fall depends a lot on where they live and from
    a purely nature orientation, many also revere and celebrate
    fall in their own region and elsewhere. Thanks for sharing
    your reflections and perspectives.
    Best wishes always, Ronni
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HI Ronni, I love this picture sweet lady...all but the snake...LOL...but I love most of the critters in God's creations...LOL...this is such an up spirited poem to read...made me smile...I love watching the picture...amazing...and you describe it beautifully...
I love your poem my sweet friend...and love your colors...
so very nicely written...and the picture...breath taking...Winter first...then Fall...can't wait...love you...Linda xxoo

I hope all has been well with you...and you have been safe and healthy...xxoo


 Comment Written 14-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
    Hi dear Linda,
    Thanks for all your gracious and generous compliments on this
    one dear, was fun to write and virtually play with the little fall
    creatures having a ball with fall's treats and fascinations,
    So pleased you enjoyed. I am fine, and hope you are too...
    take care of you always! Love blessings, Ronni

reply by l.raven on 24-Aug-2020
    Hi Ronni, you are sooooo welcome sweet lady...so glad to hear you are doing well...blessings to you as well...much love...God Bless...Linda xxoo
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This is certainly a lovely illustration for your lovely poem about autumn. It sets the stage for your words perfectly. This is well written and enjoyable. Nicely done.


 Comment Written 06-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
    Thank you for your kind thoughts and compliments on this one,
    so pleased you enjoyed, most uplifting and sincerely appreciated,
    Lots more Fall ahead, hope you thoroughly enjoy yours wherever
    you are. Have a terrific week, and compliments to you for
    your most enchanting smile. Stay safe.
    Best wishes, Ronni
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Very nice, no, beautiful poem of the diversity of autumn. I am a free verse writer myself, and a lover of internal rhymes, good flow, musicality in the poem and the use of alliteration. I enjoyed all of that in this poem. "flirtatiously fall's furry, feathered, and winged dwellers..." Beautiful!


 Comment Written 06-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
    Thank you for your lovely and gracious comments and compliments on this poem, and that you especially enjoyed it, added reward
    and so happy for the pleasure it brought you, most appreciated!
    Have a gorgeous week, and stay safe.
    Best wishes, Ronni

reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 08-Aug-2020
    Welcome, Ronni!
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Your words always manage to make my heart slow down just a bit and my mind breathe and stay still ... even if just for a moment! ;) So beautifully penned, Lady Ronni! ;)
I'm checking in for a bit today just cuz I needed to do so for a bit -- back to reality tomorrow as classes start... ugh. I'm thinking I'm at a big crossroads in my life and it's time to make a decision... but I'm not sure what it is... sigh. So, for now, I'm just reviewing and reflecting... if that makes sense...
Thanx for sharing your thoughts and gentle visions, my lady -- so very appreciated!! ;) Yvette


 Comment Written 06-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
    HI dear,
    Reviewing an reflecting like you are, while at a big crossroads and
    urgent decision making pending, is wise and right thing to do dear.
    My thoughts and prayers are with you on this...so do take all time
    you need,even if a bit of overtime...
    Glad you liked this one and gave you a pleasurable moment in
    tranquil pause; and such lovely and gracious compliments dear.
    Take care of you dear...
    Love, blessings, Ronni
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You KNOW how I look forward to
autumn, ha ha.
What a totally DELIGHTFUL picture!!
Such a beautiful poem Miss Ronni,
describing every good thing about
the most beautiful season.
Wonderful!!
Blessings...


 Comment Written 05-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
    Hello Irish Rain,
    Yes I do KNOW and REMEMBER dear, so this indeed was one
    especially FOR you and your favorite season! Lots more fall
    ahead, so have a grand time! I'm favoring fall a lot more
    too after our 100 + heat wave here!!!!
    Love and blessings always,
    Ronni

reply by Irish Rain on 07-Aug-2020
    100+...WOW....c'mon October!!!! Have a great week!!!
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Wow Ronni! This is such a colorful poem and so colorfully presented as well. I really had fun scampering down the verses enjoying the fall shades of "ocher, vermillion and crimson," then "amber and scarlet" and "silver and grey." You must be a true artist to paint pictures like these. I enjoyed the "beauty and bounty" from start to finish. Thanks for the ride.


 Comment Written 04-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
    Thank you dear Merri, for enjoying this poem and all your
    generous and gracious comments and compliments on it!
    And most appreciative of the extra star too dear!!!
    Love, Ronni
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Hi Ronni, I can smell the breeze and scents from hear, I have softened wondered what it would be like in the fall in the states. Don't know what goldenrods are but guess they are buttercups or similar. Cheers Colin

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 Comment Written 04-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
    Hello Sir Colin,
    Fall here in the States is truly wonderfully colorful and robust
    time of year, each state has their own local and regional features
    and fascinations. And the sights, sounds and scents aromatic
    and nostalgic indeed.
    Thanks for your thoughtful comments and reflections shared.
    Sincerely appreciated. Take care. Stay safe.
    Best wishes always, Ronni
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Such a delight for my eyes longing for Autumn's glories. It is my favorite time of year. I must travel to my native Georgia to partake for I live in the tropics. I can't wait and to gather my apples for pies and sauce! Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....


 Comment Written 04-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
    Hello dear Sally,
    Thanks for enjoying this one dear, Autumn is indeed a saucy and
    spicy time of year for our eager taste buds for our favorites!
    How wonderful you can enjoy the lovely tropics and also
    your favorite Autumn time in Georgia! Have a blast dear!
    Thanks so much for the EXTRA STAR dear! Appreciate it!
    Love always, Ronni

reply by Sally Law on 10-Aug-2020
    You are most welcome. I enjoyed this so much!! Sal XOs.....
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