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Humility


Learning the hard way

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To Write Is To Live
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Congratulations on the win, and for sharing your deeply personal story via poetry! Thank you for writing so passionately about what you experienced and learned, and, most importantly, sharing your work with us.
God bless you as you continue advocating for the differently-abled!
Please stay safe and well.
With Admiration,
To Write is To Live


 Comment Written 15-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
    Welcome to Fanstory and thank you for your kind review. I had written the full story of my accident some time ago. You will make lots of friends on the site. I have been here for over ten years! Blessings, Kay xx
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A very well-written poem about humility. Sometimes we need something bad to happen to our body in order to safe our soul which is more important to God.


 Comment Written 05-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
    Thank you Sandra. A hard lesson to bring me to God.
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Excellent entry into the one word poetry contest, K. The precipitating accident leading to your transformation was rough, and thank goodness you had within you the humility and fortitude to heal your spirit with humility.

This is a fine testimonial and I wish you much luck in the voting booth.

Gloria


 Comment Written 04-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
    Hello Gloria, Thank you so much for your kind review. Sometimes the Universe takes drastic action to teach us lessons. K xx
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This is a beautiful descriptive example showing what humility is about...how it changes a person when tragic developments occur and there is no where to go except to look upwards and finally be able to feel and understand the perfect love our Creator God personally has for us. The hope we gain helps us through the difficult days that will still occur; and help us look past them to the coming time and place where eternity is a glorious promise being fulfilled. Thank you for sharing this, Kay. I think it will help those who are fortunate enough to be reading it. Hugs, Janet


 Comment Written 04-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
    Hello Janet, Thanks so much for your kind review. Lessons are sometimes learnt the hard way. I hope it helps those who are hurting, lonely and don't know Our Father. Blessings, K xx
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Your free verse form expresses clearly the journey you are on. Life can change in an instant and when an accident happens, God is there to help us along as your words describe. I think many can relate to and learn from your words.


 Comment Written 04-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
    Bless you my friend. Sometimes we need to be brought low to learn humility and compassion. Blessings, K xx
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Your moving, deeply personal poem vividly describes how you learned the necessity of humility AND its origin, the Lord Himself, the source of all good things.


 Comment Written 04-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
    Hello Janice, Yes, it was a life-changing event, for the better. I haven't looked back. Blessings, K xx
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I understand your description of the word humility perfectly, Aussie. You described it in personal terms so readers can identify with it, too. Your words flow smoothly with great imagery and feeling. Your notes add more info. It all fits together that shows we all need God and He can, and will do, wonderful 'things' for us if we ask. The image is beautiful too--uplifting as are your words.
Thank you for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan


 Comment Written 04-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
    Hello Jan, Not often do I share myself, I just felt it may help someone out there who doesn't know the Lord. Blessings, K xx
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Good luck in the contest, Kace. You said so much in this poem but the fact that you survived was an important issue. And to survive you had to first become humble says a lot. The priest was indeed wise. Well done.


 Comment Written 04-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
    Thanks so much my friend. He does catch us when we fall. It was life-changing, but it brought much joy and love. Blessings, K xx
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Good luck in the contest, Kace. You said so much in this poem but the fact that you survived was an important issue. And to survive you had to first become humble says a lot. The priest was indeed wise. Well done.


 Comment Written 04-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
    Tanka you so much my friend. Love, Kxx

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    You are most welcome, my friend.

reply by aryr on 05-Aug-2020
    You are most welcome, my friend.
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This is a very well written and beautiful testimony you have penned. And yes, when we are weak He is strong in us. Beautiful words and lovely imagery. May God bless you! love, Teri


 Comment Written 04-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
    Hello Teri, It was life-changing for the better. God knows best. I have never looked back and selfish isn't in my nature now. Much love my friend. K xx
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