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Humility


Learning the hard way

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Raffaelina Lowcock
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One would never think that a sacrifice such as you have experienced would gain us anything. Yet, it seems that through suffering we become stronger and better human beings.

" Give way so as to conquer"
I did give way, I handed my broken body
Over to the One who could heal me
I have never had so much love and peace" How very humble!

Ralf


 Comment Written 04-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
    Hello Raffa, Thanks so much for reading. He changed me and used me for His purpose. God always knows our failings and our strengths.
    Bless you, K xx
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Colin John
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Hi, so happy you found what you were looking for and the visit from the priest that day, lovely story of self-finding and the power of the bible when nothing else is their for a person. kind regards Colin x


 Comment Written 04-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
    Hello friend Colin, Sometimes we need to be brought low before we can learn to love others not ourselves. Blessings, Kxx

reply by Colin John on 05-Aug-2020
    (:
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June Sargent
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It was very humble of you to share your experience in poetic form. Life lessons may be hard to learn at first, but if we apply them, we are a better person in the end. Thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 04-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
    It wasn't easy to share June, thought it may help someone. Love, K xx
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Pam (respa)
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-Very nice image,
and presentation, Aussie.
-Your notes are appreciated, too.
-A well written poem that is
honest, sharing this event in your life.
-A very good opening verse that
sets the groundwork for the word you chose.
-You tell your story with honesty about
what you went through and how you felt.
-The ending after you met with the
priest is also very good, and shows how
you have been able to have
"love and peace."
-Very well done; good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 04-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
    Thank you Pam. I don't usually share my life change but I thought it may help someone. Love, Kxx

reply by Pam (respa) on 05-Aug-2020
    You are very welcome, and thanks for sharing your reply.
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