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True Contentment


Our faces tell so many things without a word

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I personally think this woman is imagining a nice ice-cream sundae and most definitely that could be just the thing.

Excellent wee eight line poem that even has some rhyme.

Good luck to you in the contest J with this gem. :)

Gloria


 Comment Written 07-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
    Gloria, this could well be true. That is the uniqueness of our individuation, is what we project on our faces also on her hearts and minds?

reply by Gloria .... on 07-Aug-2020
    Well that would be the fundamental basis of "acting" as is that of the performance arts industry, but in daily face-to-face interactions, I'm not convinced that the statement our faces project our hearts and minds is true, due to the fact of so many external influences out of the control of the person in possession of said face.

    That said, this is a great piece, and I wish you all the best.
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You have made excellent use of your eight words to convey a message about smiles---genuine smiles that come naturally, don't look forced or there just to impress.


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    Janicde thank you! I appreciate your kind comments, thank you, have a super weekend.
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They say body language speaks volulmes. You can tell what someone is thinking my the slightest movement of an eye. To see a true smile lets you know that someone really does care.


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    Mia, yes do very true👌
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What a wonderful 'shortie with rhyme' - great job! ;) Such a unique offering for this extremely limited format contest - best of luck to you at the polls! ;)


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    Thank you very much!
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A lovely romantic 8 word poetry prompt entry you have made here and love the photo which gives it that extra push. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the competition.Kind regards Colin


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    Colin, I do thank you for the strong validation in your comments.
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Your works work so well with that lady's expression. I wonder what she's thinking about! It's hard to write a contest entry with just eight words, but this one is excellent. Well done and good luck! :)) Sandra xxx


 Comment Written 06-Aug-2020



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    Sandra our faces, while often can be a reflection of a persons Higher self too frequently project the egoic masks or the role one is playing in realtime. So unfortunate this is.
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It's thought by many that the outward signs are evidence of the inner glow, although inner peace is probably much broader than that, beautifully written entry in 8 word contest, good luck, blessings, Roy


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    Thank you Roy, I appreciate your comments.

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    Bless you
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Our faces say so much about how we are feeling and if we can read the signs we find out so much more that what we hear, I enjoyed your contented smile here, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 06-Aug-2020



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    Dolly, thank you very much!
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This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the 8 Words Poetry contest. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!


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    Rebecca, thank you I trust you are staying safe, have a great day!

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 06-Aug-2020
    I am staying safe so far.
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-You have used your
8 words well and have
a good topic about
contentment, along
with a positive message.
-You show how you
know this person's smile
reflects sincerity, and
is "no myth."
-Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 05-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
    Pam, thanks have a good day.

reply by Pam (respa) on 05-Aug-2020
    You are welcome, and you have a good day, too!
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