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Those Worthy Things


Doing things the worthwhile way

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Thank you for sharing this enlightening poem with us today. Too many times we do focus too much on our material things. I know that as I have gotten older and downsized my wants and needs that I really don't miss those " things". Yup... just things! I have so much more wealth in my life with my family and friends than I ever did before.


 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020


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What a great poem. We should not concern ourselves with material possessions. I love the line about words and our actions that should count.
Especially in this time of our lives, we need to be kind to each other.


 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020


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I can see you put a lot of heart into your poetry. 75 years is a long time to have been writing. I also prefer poetry that rhymes. Most of the free form I just do not understand. Your entry here has a nice flow to it and was easy to read. I enjoyed reading it.


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This is an exceptional and profound piece of poetry dear jaybird! I find solace in your poem.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
Rebekka x


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Wow, beautifully said and written poem about lives challenges and the wisdom that comes with each challenge. Thank you for sharing and have a blessed week.


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An uplifting, positive poem in the midst of our current craziness. Refreshing to read, beautifully rhymed, well written. "When life is done and all is through, what better could one ever do?" An excellent question to ponder.


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Your poem has an even flow, and meter, well rhymed AABB sceme and a lovely and meaningful message - at the end of the day (and life) our actions are what matters and not our possession.


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You're absolutely right, "naked I came from my mother's and naked I will return. The Lord gives and the Lord will take away. Blessed be the name of the Lord." Job 1:21. Beautifully written my Friend, and as great as ever. Well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : Death(')s eternal sky.


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This rhyming poem is nicely written and reads well with a bouncy flair and has a great moral in that things are only as good as they are used in this life to get us to the beginning of eternal life. giovanni


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Heartfelt sentiments skillfully expressed in fine rhythm and rhyme--apt message--powerful opener possessions have but little worth to lead us through... Well done. Cheers. LIZ


 Comment Written 08-Aug-2020


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