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Enfleurage


Be nice and never stop learning :)

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I liked the message behind your piece. We can always improve, no matter how old we are, we should always be open to advice. A really well written piece, I thought your writing flowed well. I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest!


 Comment Written 11-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
    Thanks so much for this great review :)
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I find an interesting stir of ingredients in this particular read, compelling views abruptly spoken, stating aims strongly desired. All stated in my given viewpoint.


 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
    Thank you very much for this great review :)
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Interesting theme. Nice image to go with it. I like your notes helpful and encouraging. It takes a humble person to realize their mistakes as you mentioned. Your poem is uplifting, thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
    Thank you very much for this great review, I'm glad you liked it :)
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Enfleurage
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Hello my friend

Nice entry for the Rhyming Poetry Contest.

It seems like you want to help people learn in a non judgemental way.

I like the Harkness teaching method ... The round table is more inclusive.

Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
    Thank you very much for this great review :) Really appreciated
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These words do seem to say that you want to help people learn in a non judgemental way. The Harkness method seems to be like a free thinking group that help each other.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet


 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020



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    Thank you very much for this review :)

reply by dragonpoet on 10-Aug-2020
    You are very welcome.
    dp
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I have read this poem several times and the more times I read it, the better it is and sounds to me, as if it has a life all its own which unfolds like a flower or pressed flower exuding a profound benevolence for our fellow mankind, learned by knocks of past immaturity, once festering, now encouraged by courage. giovanni


 Comment Written 09-Aug-2020



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    Thank you for this exceptional review, it means a lot :)

reply by giovannimariatommaso on 10-Aug-2020
    y/w giovanni
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A very strong poem, with free verse style rhyming, a powerful but slightly bombastic words to give the thrust of the message across, love the challenging language you use. Life teaches us lessons that may prove the proverb, "be quick to hear and slow to speak" beautifully written, an excellent work, good luck, blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 09-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
    Thank you so much for this encouraging review :)
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Thanks for the notes- especially to begin with 'Enfleurage'. I needed to know that one!

What a grand way to discuss 'topics'.

Best of luck with the Rhyming Poetry Contest.


 Comment Written 09-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
    Thank you so much for this great review :)
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Your poem is interesting. I agree that we should all keep learning no matter your age or your inteligence. There is also the fact that there is nobody who knows everything!
Great job!
Patty


 Comment Written 09-Aug-2020



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    Thank you so much for this great review :)

reply by Patty Palmer on 09-Aug-2020
    You're welcome!
    Patty
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Some great lines in your rhymed poem. I especially like the first two that the acerbic tongue is non-returnable if empty. Important point there is too much knee-jerk nastiness going on these days.

Agreed, be kind and life long learning are two attributes to good living. I like the free verse feel and strong word choices lend excellent motion to your poem.

Wishing you much luck with the Contest Committee.

Gloria


 Comment Written 09-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
    Thank you so much for this great review. It's always tough with the Committee, so I'll take all the luck I can get :)
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