Contact Us | En español    
         Join today or login

Status

New Here?
Sign Up
Fast! Three Questions.

Already a member?
Login

Contests

Share A Story In A Poem
Deadline: In 2 Days

2-4-2 Poetry
Deadline: In 3 Days

Nonet Poetry Contest
Deadline: In 5 Days

True Story Flash
Deadline: Dec 7th

5-7-5 Poetry
Deadline: Dec 10th


Writing Classes

0 classes available. Click here locate a class and to learn more.

Rank

Poet: None
Author: None
Novel: None
Reviewer:None
Votes: None






Reviews from
The Training Table


Mama always knows best

  44 total reviews 
Comment by
Jacob David Collins
 
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  201
Author Rating For Novels
  Rank:  18
Review Stars
  Rank:  283
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
It's true I think a parent always knows what is best for their child. I thought this was an entertaining piece of poetry which I enjoyed reading. I thought your writing flowed well.


 Comment Written 11-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
    I appreciate your comments, have a great week.
Comment by
Eternal Muse
Level 1 Pro
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  147
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Author Rating For Novels
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  27
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
I found this very amusing. Loved your humor and wit, your plot, and actually your quinoa and tofu dish made me hungry! (lol). I liked how he was back on his mamma's dish and his "lassie" got chagrined (lol). Excellent descriptive imagery and artwork. I loved this poem and thank you very much for sharing it with us.


 Comment Written 11-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
    Smiling back at your comments and enjoyment of this free verse
Comment by
Ben B.
Premier Author
 
Poet Rating
 
Author Rating For Novels
  Rank:  51
Review Stars
  Rank:  75
 
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
This poem needs to labeled as a comedy! It's just so hard to find a happy middle with your meals, especially with two women in your life nagging you the way you need to eat. I had to calm myself down after reading this.


 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
    Ben thank you for the six-stars, every man has had his mama wife clashes, often over the meals.
Comment by
Iza Deleanu
Premier Author
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  104
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  10
Author Rating For Novels
  Rank:  10
Script Rating
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  13
 

#10 Ranked Author

#10 Ranked Novelist
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Wow, I just love your poem funny enough and also very expressive. Greenies are the death of fat but also of strengths. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.


 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
    Iza, thank you!
Comment by
ameen786
Premier Author
Premier Reader
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  122
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Script Rating
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  228
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
With us being constraint in homes, we need a lassie to prevent us from doing nothing but eating; a delightful read in excellent rhymes and great flow; thanks for the treat.


 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
    ameen thank you, Sir! I appreciate your review and comments.
Comment by
Vanna1
Premier Author
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  263
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  161
Review Stars
  Rank:  107
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
The flow is bumpy at times. Interesting theme and funny too. Mama's cooking is always finger licking. My kids don't eat other foods well. This is a refreshing poem.


 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
    Vanna, I believe most children have some issue with variety in foods. thank for your review and comments.
Comment by
TPAC
Premier Author
 
Poet Rating
 
Author Rating For Novels
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  170
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
I found this write humorous in its presentation, captivating sequences evolving a story, thinking one possible adjustment: do not leave your chin on your chest. All stated in my given opinion.


 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
    Smiling back! I hope your week is one of great reward and opportunities.
Comment by
Gypsy Blue Rose
Premier Author
Premier Reader
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  9
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Author Rating For Novels
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  16
 

#9 Ranked Poet
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
The Training Table
by JLR

Hello, my friend,

Nice Rime Couee poem.

Haha.... it's funny. James Michael needed to go on a diet. I like the clever ending.


 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
    Thank you for reviewing this silly little Rime Couee!
Comment by
Raul1
JOSE CONDE
Miami
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  124
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  151
Review Stars
  Rank:  79
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
I like how you structured this poem. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Nice job. I like it. The lines all rhymes and are aligned. Thanks for sharing!


 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
    Raul, I do thank you for your comments.
Comment by
gramalot8
Premier Author
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  363
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  405
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
I loved the humor is this great poem. I can envision rascal scenario from your descriptive of James Michaels times with hisMana, then wifey, then happily with Mama again.... poor Brassie lassie!!


 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
    Thank you, it was fun to spin this little Rime Couee, have a great week.
  -1-  2 3 4 5  Next Page 


Market your book.
Advertising options.
mountain acrostic
acrostic poem


Share or Bookmark
  Contact Us | En español | Advertise With Us

© 2015 FanStory.com, Inc. All Rights Reserved. Terms under which this service is provided to you. Privacy