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I imagined the headlines!

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Hmm, this is interesting. I am curious about a few things but I also don't really want to know. I can guess how strong a baboon in the wild really is compared to a human. Perhaps people in their excitement forget things like that until it's too late.

Good entry.


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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
    Thank you for reading and positively reviewing my story. In that part of the world much of baboon territory has been taken over by humans and they have taken to stealing food by what ever means possible.
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I hope they'll be more careful around wild animals in the future! Your imagined headlines were certainly within the realm of possibility. People can be a little dumb, can't they? Good luck in the contest.


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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
    Thank you, Cindy, for your positive review and good luck wishes.
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