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Mastery
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I still don't understand why I am not receiving notices when you post new stuff, Jeff? This makes the second time and this was not a blind was it?

Good job at any rate. I think you have a real winner here. "we'll seek and find...peace."

: ) Bob


 Comment Written 17-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
    Thanks my friend. So glad that you approve. I appreciate you sharing your generous comments and the excellent review. Bless you! It was a blind contest.

reply by Mastery on 22-Aug-2020
    Do you know why I am not being notified, Jeff? Bob

reply by Mastery on 22-Aug-2020
    oh...it WAS a blind. Okay. Sorry. Bob

reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
    I?ve been entering contests for the most part my friend. It doesn?t notify you if you?re my friend because it?s a blind contest. I like entering blind contests because nobody knows who it is. I think that perhaps some readers can be more unbiased because they don?t know.

reply by Mastery on 22-Aug-2020
    Good thinking, Jeff You could be right. Bob (Unfortunately, the committee knows who has submitted them, don't they? Unless something is up for a vote it still doesn't pay does it? :Bob
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This, my friend this is exceptional. Not only the poem, but the picture that
is posted. The picture hit the nail on the head. There wouldn't be the problems if all did what your writing and picture implies. This is the only 5-7-5 I have ever given six stars.


 Comment Written 17-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
    I'm honored. Thank you kindly. I appreciate you sharing your uplifting and encouraging comments along with the exceptional review. I hope to continue to write work worthy of such reviews. Bless you!
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Youe words are inspiring, I believe also that they are true. There will be an end to all the dissention in this world and peace will come again. I hope it will be soon.


 Comment Written 17-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
    I hope so too. Your very kind and generous comments along with the excellent review are greatly appreciated. Bless you.
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I'm so upset that I missed this sweet poem! The answer to the world's ills is found in the love we share with our brother and sisters. Congratulations on your win, Jeffrey!

Sending you my best today as always, and blessings in Christ,
Sally xo


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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
    Thank you kindly sister! I appreciate your congratulations, encouraging comments, and the excellent review. Bless you!
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Hello Jeffrey.

Congratulations on the contest win. You5-7-5 is done to perfection. I for one certainly support your words and inte4nt of the poem. Peace is what we all need.

Robert


 Comment Written 17-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
    Thank you sir! I appreciate you sharing your supportive and kind comments along with the excellent review. Bless you!

reply by Robert Zimmerman on 21-Aug-2020
    You're welcome
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Love the picture you found to go with the poem. Love how this was formed in the challenge of a writing prompt, and how you nailed it with such poetic inspiration... During times where we might need it the most, the poem opens a blind eye, or at least sets a reminder with the concept of love... A powerful, yet so simple 5-7-5


 Comment Written 16-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
    Thank you. I'm so glad that you approve. I appreciate you sharing your encouraging and supportive comments along with the excellent review. Bless you!
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I give you that, finding this statement precise in coherency, presenting a profound reality. I have no suggestion to improve this particular write. All views stated in my opinion.


 Comment Written 16-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
    Thank you kindly! Your very kind and encouraging comments along with the exceptional review are greatly appreciated. I hope to continue to write work worthy of such reviews. Bless you!
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Truer words have never been spoken. This is exactly what we need during these times. Truly inspiring words for such a short poem. Thank you for sharing.


 Comment Written 16-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
    Thank you for your very kind and supportive comments along with the excellent review. Bless you!
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I love the innocence and the beauty of the photo, Jeffrey. Kids teach us lessons every day, and this is about the best lesson ever.
I love your 5-7-5 that gives us all hope...when our hope and love increase--
We'll seek and find peace. I think the poem also infers that life is touch and we're all in this together.
Beautiful poem, Jeffrey.
Congratulations on winning first place!
Blessings,
Cindy


 Comment Written 16-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
    Thank you so much. I appreciate your congratulations, generous and encouraging comments along with the excellent review. Bless you!
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Andreea Ceplinschi
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Great little poem, you manage to express a clear message of love as driver for positive change. Doing so in such a tight space is no small feat. I also admire your ability to rhyme within this compact poem as well. As a minor suggestion: I don't think you need the ellipsis before "peace." Since your poem rhymes, as a reader, I kind of expect the final word to be peace, so the suspense of those three little dots seems unnecessary.
Wonderful work, thank you for sharing.


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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you sharing your thoughtful and encouraging comments along with the excellent review. Bless you!
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