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Yesterday Is Gone


You are always in my heart

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harmony13
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The words of this poem are heartfelt, sad, clear and creative. I found
the author's description of memory vivid. The poem flows and connect well. This poem convey a love that is so hard to find.
Hope you had a great weekend!....Maria


 Comment Written 16-Aug-2020


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Jay,
A very heartfelt poem. Your words stir emotions in all
of us. Many relate to losing their own loved one, but all
can relate to a part of us to life's losses.
True love always burns in our memories. Thank you
for sharing.
Peace,
Richie b




 Comment Written 16-Aug-2020


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There is deep emotion on display through the lines of this sonnet about a lost loved one. All of the lines offer perfect rhyme and a theme that many have experienced and are able to relate to on personal levels. Thank you for sharing!


 Comment Written 16-Aug-2020


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A sentiment many readers will share with you, losing a beloved too soon - narrated here with candour and profound emotion - heartfelt and moving -language of the heart


 Comment Written 16-Aug-2020


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"My life remains in yesterday." My favorite line.

What a touching memory you have shared.

As always, I enjoy reading your poems.


 Comment Written 16-Aug-2020


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The best always go first, Jaybird, and the criminals, and nasty people live a life of good health! It's not fair. I'm sorry you lost your wife so early, we all have our dreams and plans, and to be robbed of those before they've been completed, is so hard. I liked your poem, I'm sure she reads them all and smiles lovingly down on you. Well done, my friend. :) Sandra xx


 Comment Written 16-Aug-2020


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This is a beautifully written poem of love and loss and longing. It seems that you have been fortunate indeed to have had a love such as yours. A lovely write.


 Comment Written 15-Aug-2020


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This poem, Yesterday is Gone, is a sad musing about what was and what could have been. With faith one feels that relationships will live again.


 Comment Written 15-Aug-2020


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Sad poem.
Line 4--maybe use "of" instead of "on."
Line 7--"depart" means to leave, and here it seems to suggest that the two would never leave where they are. Do you mean "be separated"? Consider using "I knew we'd never be apart" instead.


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Another touching tribute to your dear wife--so sad she's not here to read your loving words. Flows in fine rhythm and rhyme with elegant imagery--breezes played melody. Cheers. LIZ


 Comment Written 15-Aug-2020


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