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Yesterday Is Gone


You are always in my heart

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You pour your heart out, it is a good thing to share your loss with us. We can't go back (I lost mine last October) but we can wait in joyful hope of the coming of the Spirit, where we will all meet again. Blessings, K.


 Comment Written 15-Aug-2020


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-A very good tribute to
the love between your
and your wife, jaybird.
-Very nice nature imagery
in verse one.
-I think she is appreciating
each of the poems you
write about her, and knows
how much you love her.
-I think she sends her love
back to you, too.
-Have a good weekend.


 Comment Written 15-Aug-2020


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Hi Jaybird,
This is a touching poem about missing your wife. You did a grand job on this one too. You shared that you both shared hope, desires and dream when she was with you. That's nice. Your poems shows how much you miss and loved your wife. I love your last line, "Where you may be, stay in my heart- I'll join you soon, our life restart." Beautifully written, Jay. Well done. Happy future writing:-)


 Comment Written 15-Aug-2020


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You have a smooth poetic flow and your theme touches the heart. Those who have lost a spouse early can relate to your words. "My life remains is yesterday" is a powerful line that impacts your words.


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Your poem of love is beautifully written and I enjoyed reading it. It flows wonderfully with memories and sentiments of love for your late wife. Your poem is discriptive and it paints a picture of natures beauty. Best wishes!


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Hello Jaybird
Thank you for sharing another one lamentations about losing your dear wife with tears in my eyes as I was reading

Where you may be, stay in my heart-
I'll join you soon, our life restart.
Gert


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Another beautiful sonnet and love poem for your wife. Your sadness over losing your wife so early and both heart-wrenching and also to be commended. A beautiful love to be cherished as you do.

Blessings
Janet


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HI Jay, she is not only in your heart sweet guy...
she is right there with you...if you believe in God...you believe in spirits...her's is with you always...true love is forever...even in eternity...God Bless...I love your poem...very nicely written...Linda xxoo


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Your poems always hit home with me because I lost my husband eleven years ago, but I still hold him in my heart. Well done. I suggest you start out with "[One] moonlit night." Other than that I like it very much. Blessings. Nancy:)


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Hello Jake,
A beautiful poem of the pain of the love and loss
in losing your life-partner so early in the journey.
Excellent rhymes and message of hope in the reunion
that awaits us all.
Well done.
Best wishes to you.
Robert


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