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Yesterday Is Gone


You are always in my heart

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That's so sad, I know how precious life partners are, someone to talk to about one's children, and now grandchildren, it would be incredibly lonely without her, and I feel fo you. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy


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A very well-written poem about losing a partner that's never planned for ahead and we know we cannot change the past but our memories will always go back to relive the good times.


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What a lovely heartfelt poem. Your love is deep and endearing. I wish your plans had been fulfilled, and that you could have spent all your years with your beloved.


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I know those feelings and we sometimes live in the past and wonder where all the time went, and we do it more as we age, a fine rhyming poem here, love Dolly x


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This poem moved me. "My life remains in yesterday." I thought that was the most powerful sentence. That could be a book title.
I too have written many poems as an outlet for grief. I'm so sorry for your loss.


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A beautiful tribute to your wife, Jay. I've read quite a few you have written to her and each and every one of them are so unique, it's like a reading a different poem each time.

Beautiful rhyme and metre and as far as I am concerned, if these are laments for losing your wife so early, just keep going, because they are universal in appeal.

Always a pleasure to read and review your poetry.

Gloria


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What a moving sonnet about your deceased wife. I could feel your love for her in your long marriage. It was full of moonlit night and melody by the wind. I can feel your longing to see her again.

Well done.


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A very nice tribute to the wife and friend you miss so dearly and that you want to be re-united with and hope that in her place now she would not have forgotten the happy and fun times spent with you in this life. Many thanks for sharing. Kind regards Colin


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Nice reminsences of the past with a loved on - moonlit walks, mountain streams. Fate intervened and ruled against the lovers, but it often happens. Loved the romantic tone and descriptive imagery.

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I saw in you your soul and heart,
under the starlit magic spell
and knew we never would depart.
Together we would always dwell.

Did you mean "... we never wold depart?" or
"and knew we'd never be apart?"


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My friend, you penned a beautiful poem in simple, yet so meaningful, poignant verses, with some beautiful, unique phrases, "My life remains in yesterday,"-that's simply amazing; thank you for sharing.


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