I think this is the most beautiful of all your poems I have ever read. Sometimes people do positive things with yearning--write poetry and books, paint. And sometimes yearning hurts when we lost someone so close to us. You do so well to portray a yearning, or even a burning to be reunited with your loved one. I feel the same way about some loved ones I have lost, but I know I am here because God still has plans for me on Earth. Have a wonderful weekend, Jaybird.
Good luck with all your writing endeavors.
It is very apparent that you miss your soul mate and look forward to seeing her again someday. At least you have her in your hear, where memories of the years that you did share together, keep your love warm and alive. Thank you for sharing these beautiful sentiments.
You write beautiful poetry. This is a wonderful poem you wrote about remembering good memories. I think that is pleasant to think of yesterday. Well written. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing! Happy writing!
The first two stanza conveys your past sense of connection wit romantic wording and the intent to stay together forever.
The third stanza describes the sense of longing and loss, when the only hope of reconnecting happens when this life ends.
Honest, bittersweet poem.
My favorite line is:
"My life remains in yesterday."
Thank you for sharing!