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You are always in my heart

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Dear Jaybird,
I think this is the most beautiful of all your poems I have ever read. Sometimes people do positive things with yearning--write poetry and books, paint. And sometimes yearning hurts when we lost someone so close to us. You do so well to portray a yearning, or even a burning to be reunited with your loved one. I feel the same way about some loved ones I have lost, but I know I am here because God still has plans for me on Earth. Have a wonderful weekend, Jaybird.
Good luck with all your writing endeavors.
Blessings,
Cindy


 Comment Written 14-Aug-2020


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Thank you, Jaybird for another beautiful poem about missing your wife who was taken from this world much too early. We all can understand your longing. Thanks for sharing!


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This is a very beautiful and well written rhyming poem you have penned about your wife that left too soon. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. May God bless you my friend. Teri


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It is very apparent that you miss your soul mate and look forward to seeing her again someday. At least you have her in your hear, where memories of the years that you did share together, keep your love warm and alive. Thank you for sharing these beautiful sentiments.


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You write beautiful poetry. This is a wonderful poem you wrote about remembering good memories. I think that is pleasant to think of yesterday. Well written. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing! Happy writing!


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Your poem is well-written, descriptive, and touching. It conveys a powerful message about loss, longing, and anticipation of being with the4 lost loved one in Heaven someday.


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It is sad to have a dream with someone and then have that person taken from you. You are left alone to live the dreams you talked bout by yourself. It is tragic.


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Your hope of being reunited when your time comes, shines through every poem where she is a part. Your dream will be a reality for sure one day and you will know what was worth waiting for.

Ralf


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I really enjoyed reading this lovely poem. I found it very poignant and your description of the moonlit night was very atmospheric. Nice one Jaybird. Take care. Jen.


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The first two stanza conveys your past sense of connection wit romantic wording and the intent to stay together forever.
The third stanza describes the sense of longing and loss, when the only hope of reconnecting happens when this life ends.
Honest, bittersweet poem.

My favorite line is:
"My life remains in yesterday."
Thank you for sharing!


 Comment Written 14-Aug-2020


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