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Yesterday Is Gone


You are always in my heart

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Thank you for sharing this heartfelt poem with us. Your words definitely depict a beautiful life together and then the loss felt when it ends. And it's always nice to believe we will be united together again someday.


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I take it, that this is your wife. A sweet remembrance and hope for your future. A Christian has this hope for life eternal in Christ.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo


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Hi Jay, I'm so sorry that your wife passed so early on. I hope you did have many good years together. I'm sure that one day you'll meet up again. Thanks for sharing yet another well written poem. Ulla:)))


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Another beautiful prayer in sonnet form to your dear wife--sad but heartwarming as well--you capture the magic of your love and your longing to be together again.
All the Best!
Phil


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I'm so sorry for your lost, however it is a beautiful poem of love;-)
EXCELLENT poem!

Thanxxx for sharing;-) Have a beautiful day and may God bless you and your family;-)


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Another heart-breaking read. You paint a clear picture as to how painful it can be to lose someone who we love dearly. There is always that longing and hope that we will see them again. A well written piece.


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on what our future life should be. (future lives, it seems like you've indicated there are at least two people in this contemplation)

Other than this small note, I enjoyed the piece. Great work and thanks for sharing. Later daze.


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Yesterday Is Gone
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Hello, Mr Jay,

I'm very sorry for your loss. Even though it has been a long time you still miss her. It's understandable. She would love your poem, maybe she is watching from heaven.


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You did a great job with your poignant poem. Your rhymes are good, the lines flow well, and the imagery created is great. Readers can feel your sadness and longing for your beautiful wife.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

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