Love Bites Write a poem about love gone wrong or lost love. It can be sad, raw, or just plain angry (Just keep it clean). Express the emotions of the darker side of love. Any style or length. Be creative.
Thank you for sharing this heartfelt poem with us. Your words definitely depict a beautiful life together and then the loss felt when it ends. And it's always nice to believe we will be united together again someday.
Hi Jay, I'm so sorry that your wife passed so early on. I hope you did have many good years together. I'm sure that one day you'll meet up again. Thanks for sharing yet another well written poem. Ulla:)))
Another heart-breaking read. You paint a clear picture as to how painful it can be to lose someone who we love dearly. There is always that longing and hope that we will see them again. A well written piece.
You did a great job with your poignant poem. Your rhymes are good, the lines flow well, and the imagery created is great. Readers can feel your sadness and longing for your beautiful wife.
Thanks for sharing.
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