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An artful mix of poetic forms.

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kmoss
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Wow! I have been working on a regular sonnet for weeks and struggling. Reading this piece shows me how a heroic sonnet is done! This is amazing! The rhymes are so strong as was the picture that it painted in my mind.


 Comment Written 17-Nov-2020



reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
    Thank you for this very much appreciated review. I am glad the posting has helped you in your poetic journey of being exposed to different forms and learning about them. FanStory is a super place for variety and reading excellent writings of all kinds.
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Rating of Chapter 7 -
Patterns in Life (Revived)
Another stellar addition to your portfolio. I envy you your pursuit in doing what you love combined of course with your God given talent you share with us! Loren


 Comment Written 05-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
    You definitely know how to lift up a person's day, my friend! Your supportive comments are truly welcomed and appreciated. Thank you so much! :-) Janet
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Rating of Chapter 7 -
Patterns in Life (Revived)
This is a delightfully written piece thst paying homage to, it sparkles with the inspiration of a good writer, who has captured one of the necessities of life in all provisional glory. Such a dramatic piece that fills the heart with gladness for the simple but yet profound things of life, well done Janet, beautifully done, blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 26-May-2020



reply by the author on 26-May-2020
    Thank you greatly, Roy. You have definitely uplifted my day! :-) Janet

reply by royowen on 26-May-2020
    My pleasure
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Very interesting poem. I loved the image and presentation. You gave the perfect feeling of night coming on and the birds helped with the feel of this. Thank you for sharing this piece with us. ~Brenda


 Comment Written 26-May-2020



reply by the author on 26-May-2020
    Thank you so much, Brenda. I'm so happy to know you enjoyed reading this. :-) Janet
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Not surprised that you won the contest; you wonderfully covered the earth's rotation in vivid imagery and beautiful wordings/phrases; thanks for the treat.


 Comment Written 26-May-2020



reply by the author on 26-May-2020
    Thank you greatly for your lovely comments. I truly appreciate them and I'm happy that you like the poem!
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Patterns in Life (Revived)
Beautiful, Janet!! ;) Your pen is always so very precise, my lady!! ;) Thanx so much for sharing! ;) Yvette
P.S. Know things are a little shorter, but we've started readying the house to sell and it's a BIG undertaking. I'll pop in and out when I can! ;)


 Comment Written 26-May-2020



reply by the author on 26-May-2020
    I completely understand, Yvette. I have to limit myself, too. (I can only go without enough sleep for so long before I start typing strange things.) lol Stay safe and well, my friend!!! xo
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This is a wonderfully creative free verse that runs smooth from beginning to end. The alteration used will have many readers relating. Thanks for sharing. God bless
August


 Comment Written 26-May-2020



reply by the author on 26-May-2020
    Your kind review is very uplifting, August. Thank you so much! Blessings and safety, Janet
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Rating of Chapter 7 -
Patterns in Life (Revived)
Reading this post I got a feeling that I am somewhere in Louisiana taking a stroll through the Mississippi River .thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.


 Comment Written 26-May-2020



reply by the author on 26-May-2020
    Thank you so much for reading this. I am glad it brought to mind a good feeling. I would like to be strolling along the Mississippi River as well--I live in Memphis now!
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Rating of Chapter 7 -
Patterns in Life (Revived)
It is a lovely poem that renders the evolution of a day in various places. The imagery used is very clear in its message and denotes the deep thought given to every word. Bless you, for coming in first. What a wonderful aura that presents. "
"It is dawn
When fishing boats shove off with nets piled high,
hope flares in squinting eyes scanning afar;
prayers hold pleas for schools of mullet to bring
a bountiful catch." this flows well.

a bountiful catch.


 Comment Written 25-May-2020



reply by the author on 26-May-2020
    Thank you so much, my friend. I truly appreciate your kind and supportive review. Hope you have a blessed day, Ralf! :-)
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Rating of Chapter 7 -
Patterns in Life (Revived)
This is a nice poem about the daily routine, in a course of a day when the sun rise and set. You took the time to tell what happens at certain points-
light breaks and dawn.
Good luck with your poem.



 Comment Written 25-May-2020



reply by the author on 25-May-2020
    Thank you for this wonderful review and good wishes. I appreciate them very much!
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