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The way I feel about my life

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Colin John
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Hi Jay,
yes cannot think of a better poem that ryhmes and has substance than this(except mine obviously) just kidding this is really fun to read because other than the ryhme scheme, it is what I call a proper poem with no long words or words you cannot understand just to annoy you and enough to stop you reading. This is perfect so, "well done*


 Comment Written 19-Aug-2020


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A beautiful poem about your life and the choices you made. It has a very optimistic aura and it brightened my spirits. Great descriptive imagery and visuals.

Favorite lines:

I've fought the good, along with bad
and some were happy, others sad.
Our life's made up of give and take
and all decisions that we make.

Thank you so much for sharing.


 Comment Written 19-Aug-2020


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Your poem is a wonderful description of the ups and downs of a life well lived. I am certain that someone will say "well done" - I will say it now about your poem - thank you for sharing this with us.


 Comment Written 19-Aug-2020


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Mr. Jaybird, i've always thought your poems we're not just ones that I could fully understand but, I also could totally feel their sincerity. I'd like to think that my life has been somewhat similar to yours in that I am most grateful for what I've had and I have only a few regrets of actions and words, I cannot take back. Sincerely, best wishes.


 Comment Written 19-Aug-2020


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Hello Jaybird, what a lovely poem, the contents of which many will identify with. Well written with good rhyme and rhythm and I enjoyed your author notes. I agree - written so well with down to earth simplicity. I say it now - Well Done. Warm regards Dorothy x


 Comment Written 19-Aug-2020


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-Your notes and poem
are appreciated, jaybird.
-I like the many ideas in
your poem, along with
the meter and rhyme.
-I agree that "Our life's made
up of give and take."
-I think many people will
say "Well done!" Count me
in that group!
-Have a great day and
rest of your week.


 Comment Written 19-Aug-2020


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This poem, My Open Book, is nicely worded and reflects what we all would like to feel, that our lives are here to look at and we have nothing to hide.


 Comment Written 18-Aug-2020


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Well done my friend, you penned a marvelous poem with a theme that should resonate with readers; as always, I enjoyed the excellent rhyming and smooth flow; thanks for sharing.


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Three wonderful stanzas of rhyming and definitely bouncy poetry with a great moral at the very humble "well done" which dear Jaybird, may we all hear from the Great One in the heavens, enter in, well done! giovanni


 Comment Written 18-Aug-2020


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This should have been a contest entry. If I still had a six star rating I would have given it to you. Your poem rhymes, makes sense,is spiritual, and it touches the reader emotionally. Very nice job.


 Comment Written 18-Aug-2020


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