Love Bites Write a poem about love gone wrong or lost love. It can be sad, raw, or just plain angry (Just keep it clean). Express the emotions of the darker side of love. Any style or length. Be creative.
I suppose you had Someone Else in mind to say "well done" in the end, but allow me to say it already today. Your down to earth simplicity is charming and efficient. The rhyming and metre perfect and the topic interesting. So, once again: Well done, Jaybird!
I believe this is what we can all hope for - that at the end of life we feel like it was meaningful and well lived (even if we made mistakes).
Your poem conveys how nice it would be to know that people around us (and ideally God,too) approve of our master piece (life).
Such open, human sharing!
Just one typo: Cource should be course!
Thank you again!