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Suzy Fleming Arrives; DNA Gathered
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The way I feel about my life

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I suppose you had Someone Else in mind to say "well done" in the end, but allow me to say it already today. Your down to earth simplicity is charming and efficient. The rhyming and metre perfect and the topic interesting. So, once again: Well done, Jaybird!


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I believe this is what we can all hope for - that at the end of life we feel like it was meaningful and well lived (even if we made mistakes).
Your poem conveys how nice it would be to know that people around us (and ideally God,too) approve of our master piece (life).
Such open, human sharing!
Thank you!

Just one typo: Cource should be course!
Thank you again!


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It's good you have this philosophy and a good book to offer the reader. A truthful life others may learn from and aspire to.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo

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