The way I feel about my life
MY Open Book
Hello, Mr Jay,
I love your poem. I like that it's clear and easy to understand. I agree with you, the good deeds are the ones to focus on. We all make mistakes but hopefully learn from them. Gratefulness is important for a happy life. Well done.
That is a great attitude. I enjoyed your poem. Your rhymes are good, there's good flow, and your message is strong. I believe you will hear what you hope mentioned in your notes.
Thanks for sharing.
This is a lovely poem about being an Open book. Your poems are always so honest about how you feel. It seem that you have lived a full life. Of course, you miss your wife. You have won many battles and lost a few. Your rhyming are always nicely done. I will say now to you, "Well done."
Beautiful inspirational poem to live your life to the fullest. Happy future writing:-)
Every course of your living is clearly, vividly and straightforwardly expressed and mentioned, so your book is so open that speaks wins and fails at equal footing; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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