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Christ Is Returning!


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estory
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Yes this might be the last time you get a chance to repent. I believe we are in the end times too. The Lord has been patient to give people a chance but they are rejecting him and the time of this chance will soon come to an end. estory


 Comment Written 21-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
    The time is short.
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A great story - what if it were true, and Jesus Christ was really returning to Earth? I thing we'd have paradise on earth achieved then. All malice and evil deeds will disappear, and we'd have the kingdom of the Good!

Great fantasy story, you filled me with hope. A wonderful story you penned and I enjoyed your narrative and message.


 Comment Written 21-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
    You need to work on your subtly skills. You are a little too obvious.
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A message much needed in the tumult of the world today.

If more people had 'love' in their lives, there would be much less anger in the happenings that invade all of our surroundings.



 Comment Written 20-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
    Hope and love are found in Jesus for all!
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Brother Dennis,
what a tremendous message! If I was unsaved and read this
I would certainly seriously consider calling upon God and confessing Jesus Christ as my Savior.

But what a life we are going to have in the day of the Lord.
With sinless bodies fashioned like unto His glorious body,
unhindered by time, space or physical structures. I was just today thinking [wondering] if we would be able to visit the planets in moments by just wanting to do so.

Anyway, a blessed message. Your fellow servant of the Lord, Bro. Jerry


 Comment Written 19-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
    Yes indeed! What a day that will be, when our Jesus we shall see!
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A very well-written explanation about the forgiveness of our sin don't mean we can keep doing sin willingly without care of any consequences we should live live without sin.


 Comment Written 19-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
    Any sin is done willingly by our old nature but Paul said, "Walk in the Spirit and you ill not fulfill the lusts of the flesh,"
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Thus says the Lord: 'I will return to Zion, And dwell in the midst of Jerusalem. Jerusalem shall be called the City of Truth, The Mountain of the Lord of hosts, The Holy Mountain.' (even in scripture, and/the do not need to be capitalized, which you prove in the same sentence by writing 'the Lord'. If God doesn't get a capital 't', the others shouldn't either)

He will soon be leading [the/remove] myriads of legions of Angels out of Heaven to subdue and cleanse all rebels from this sinful planet! (common error, you don't need to put in the)

2 Peter 3:9 NKJV (never paragraph break in the middle of a quote)

God will help you realize what you could never do in a million years, (what) Christ has done for you already!

Pray this prayer: (Say this prayer)

The four stars is strictly on a technical basis, for myriad errors made throughout the piece which was short and much of it quoted material.

On a personal level, your message is something I simply cannot agree with. Even if I were to subscribe to what you're saying here, you've basically said that rapists, pedophiles, murderers, can be saved if they just repent and believe in Jesus, which is not mutually exclusive from the acts they've committed or continue to commit. In fact, much pervasive violence is done in the name of God/Jesus, and they truly believe in Him and Jesus and so you're telling me that regardless of their actions, through their beliefs they are saved. That doesn't jive with me. I'm sure you will hit me back with some misguided scripture, I can quote the Bible too, I was raised Christian. It is dangerous to take allegorical and metaphorical material in any literal sense. Even if I were still a believer, I would believe you to be wrong here. Enjoy your day, later daze.


**EDIT** God will help you realize what you could never do in a million years, (what) Christ has done for you already! (even I make mistakes in my editing sometimes lol)

God will help you to realized that what you could never do in a million years, Christ has done for you already.

Also, I forgot to mention the over-abundance of exclamation points and the random bout of ellipsis were two other issues I had technically with this piece.

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 Comment Written 19-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
    What you fail to realize is every person is a born sinner in God's sight. Baby rattle snakes may not kill anyone, but their nature is already set to strike out.
    This is why Jesus said to all of us, "You must be born-again".
    You should read the Gospel of John for yourself and get to know the Biblical Christ.





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This piece, Christ is Returning, is well put together to catch the attention of even the passing reader to bring the sense of urgency into a conviction to receive the grace of God.


 Comment Written 18-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
    Thanks Bill!
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It would be awesome if Jesus would return today. Your writing reminds the reader to trust God, have faith and heaven is waiting. Excellent writing that is positive and explains Christianity.


 Comment Written 18-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
    Awesome indeed! A great Savior!
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I wrote a poem, the last actually, the funny thing Is my coming to Christ was devoid of an altar call, it was made on a guy's couch in my head right there while He was testifying, God had already appeared to me, sometime before that event. I think God is more capable than we think, well done Denis, blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 18-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
    Thanks Roy!

reply by royowen on 19-Aug-2020
    Welcome

reply by royowen on 19-Aug-2020
    Well done
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thaities, Rebecca V.
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This is a great post, well written, full of truth. The large font makes for easy and comfortable reading, and the paragraphs are short and separated. Well done again!


 Comment Written 18-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
    Thank you for your kind words! Dennis

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 19-Aug-2020
    You're welcome.
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