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I Stop and Stare


Seeking the good

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Ric Myworld
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As I've often said, when it comes to poetry, I wouldn't know a sonnet from sorbet. But, there are those rare occasions that even I can relate to a few special offerings and your's hits the spot. This is only the second piece of your work that I've read and I'm already so glad I've become a fan! I wish I had a six.


 Comment Written 22-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
    You really thrill me. Thank you for your lovely words.

    Raffaelina
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I think that you a beautiful poem! It is very relatable. Sometimes I go for walks, and I enjoy the scenery as well. I think that it is very therapeutic. I'm not to familiar with stanza poetry. Other than no periods, I didn't see any errors. Great poem!


 Comment Written 22-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
    Thank you for your fine review. I appreciate your words.

    Ralf
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Pam (respa)
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-Congratulations on
the win, Ralf.
-Beautiful image and
nice presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-I can see why you won.
-Very good imagery and rhyme.
-You create a vivid word picture
of your walk and the people
and things you encounter and enjoy.
-A good repeating line, too.
-Well done!


 Comment Written 22-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
    And a wonderful review, thank you. Your words are so appreciated.

    Ralf

reply by Pam (respa) on 22-Aug-2020
    You are very welcome, Ralf.
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Liz O'Neill
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This is a wonderful prescription for feeling better, happier and less depressed. If more people went foir walks and really took in their surrouindings, the world would be a lighter place. Eckhart Tolle would like this. It is about staying in the moment. I am voting for this one.


 Comment Written 21-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
    Thank you so much Liz. I shared first place with Louise Robertson's Why the Ocean Roars. Thanks for voting.
    Ralf
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I love this poem because it has a beautiful picture and the whole poem flows well. It also makes sense to fell better by taking a walk around the town where dog barks, gardeners gather and good people care.

Well done.


 Comment Written 21-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
    Nice sentiments here in your review. Thank you.
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Now that is a wonderful therapy for the soul. It's stopping and taking time to reflect and be thankful which is always uplifting. Thanks for sharing your walk with us in this poem. Best wishes in the contest!


 Comment Written 21-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
    Thank you for your pleasant review.
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I tend to watch people to. I think we all do as writers. It gives us a sense of the world around us. This piece promotes the wonderfulness, if that is a word, of people and their good nature.


 Comment Written 21-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
    Thank you for your complimentary review.
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harmony13
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The author's words are interesting, clear and creative. I found the author's
words being able to be aware of the goodness that surround us. Changing
how and what we look at makes a difference. This is a great poem with
a lovely message. Hope you are having a great day!


 Comment Written 21-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
    What a sweet sentiment Harmony. Thank you for this lovely review.
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thaities, Rebecca V.
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This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Repetition Poetry contest. This is revealing, and it should do well. I wish you the best of luck!


 Comment Written 21-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
    This is a charming review, thank you.

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 21-Aug-2020
    You're welcome.

reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
    Thank you but as of now there are several poems in 2nd place.

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 21-Aug-2020
    Oh, no!
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Janice Canerdy
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The beauties in life--even, or especially, the everyday scenes nature provides us during a walk--deserve a long, appreciative look. Your poem is very lovely, descriptive, and moving.


 Comment Written 21-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
    Thank you for this charming review.
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