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The Clock Keeps Ticking


A good way to live ones life

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I love the words you choose to go with your poem, your words captured my attention from the first line to the last.
Thank you for sharing this heart felted poem.
Cookie


 Comment Written 23-Aug-2020


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-Thanks for sharing
your note and poem, jaybird.
-I agree about the qualities
you mentioned making up
part of a good life.
-I like your poem with
good examples, rhyme,
and the theme of time.
-Have a good day and week ahead.


 Comment Written 23-Aug-2020


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"The Clock Keeps Ticking", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill, this talented poet tells it as he sees it. I wish you all the luck in the world with your wishes.


 Comment Written 23-Aug-2020


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That is such a lovely way to think of life and ultimate death. Though death is the beginning of a new life, it's fun to enjoy the trip as we head towards it. Some get to live a full life-time, others seem to be taken before they've had a chance to get started. We must take what we are given, gratefully, and fully.
Well done, Jaybird, I really enjoyed reading your poem. Have a lovely day! :)) Sandra xx


 Comment Written 23-Aug-2020


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Yes. Let's meet there. My clock is also ticking awAy real fast. I find your poems so uplifting. Keep them coming. Nice one Jaybird. Best wishes. Jen.


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A positive poem about the ageing process which moves us all inexorably towards our destinies. Perhaps you could tell Dylan Thomas that he doesn't need to 'rage, rage against the dying of the light.'

Oh, too bad, he's already gone to his destiny.

Steve


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My favorite part was, "Keep love, compassion by your side,
to guide you through this joyous ride.
The hope and courage it will bring,
makes life seem like eternal spring.", because I thought that these were some pretty wise words to live by!

The Lord led me to this verse after I read this,

Psalm 90:12
New International Version
12 Teach us to number our days,
that we may gain a heart of wisdom.


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Another masterpiece from the master here on FanStory. Your writings always have way of lifting my spirits, ending on such a beautiful note - beyond the sunset. Just lovely. Thanks for sharing your talent and your point of view ;)


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This is a beautiful and uplifting poem. Yes, the clock keeps ticking for all of humanity some get more some less. What a gift to keep the wonder of living in the forefront.


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I really like this poem. The message is clear. The rhyme and rhythm perfect! None of us know for sure where we will end up in the end. Just for spite, I refuse to die so I'll never have to face my destination. LOL
Patty


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