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Mary Vigasin
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I hear frustration in this writing but your perception about the world is right. I do not think even going to the forest will be an escape. We are living in a strange time. I do not know what happened to open discussion.
Take care and regards,


 Comment Written 30-Sep-2020


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Yes, I agree, our world turned into zombies. People look like zombies wearing their different color masks and gloves. People steer away from you in public places, you can almost see fear in their faces if you get too close.

When will it stop. Our country became like a different country.

Great imagery in this story. I enjoyed your narrative, your subtle humor, your presentation, and the message. Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 30-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my silly story:)
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I like and have enjoyed the read, a good thought about our state of living today (like that of zombies) anywhere is cheap but restricted, without real free and natural living; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much for your nice review:) Have a wonderful day
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This story, Zombies, may capture our present ping-ponging from politically incorrect this to 'say what?' that until we are all one big television show we can't turn off.


 Comment Written 21-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    Thank you so much for your kind review:)
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estory
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Its another great post told in that cynical, sarcastic style, about contemporary sensibilities. The days of free speech are over. its all about free speech according to 'me.' Take the Redskins. A small group of people who don't even watch the team make an issue over the name. We have teams named the 49ers, the Vikings, The Patriots, the Pirates...we may as well rename them all. estory


 Comment Written 21-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    Thank you so much for your kind review:)
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You are so right, Iza. I love your contest entry. You spelled it out perfectly--someone somewhere will be offended. Then we all hear about it forever. If we don't listen, then they'll riot in some form.

[the Big Brother have --->that Big Brother has ]

Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan





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I'm with you! So true--the PC contingent comprises professional "offense takers" for whom self-righteousness is a career. Cheers. LIZ

zombies might get offended s/b period or exclamation, not question mark; even in communism time s/b even during communism; think the Big Brother have s/b think Big Brother has. (Rework one sentence: s/b Does anybody know of a country where we can talk without fear, as we did before the pre-idiocy society?)


 Comment Written 20-Aug-2020


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Well Iza, I hardly think this work is a flash fiction story. (definitely not fiction) It is actually an essay on your feelings about freedom of speech. That aside, and knowing you cannot win the contest with it, makes it still a very interesting essay.

Many people feel as you do, including me. Bless you, Bob

ps. You should probably start reviewing other work before it gets too costly with all of these posts recently. Just sayin. : ) Bob


 Comment Written 20-Aug-2020



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    No worries:) it's funny I know I am a loser, but I can't help it:(

reply by Mastery on 20-Aug-2020
    You are NOT a loser, my friend. Bob
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You have some good lines of questions here I read 1984 as a young teen and it really scared me. I caught your reference to Big Brother! Sometimes the reality of what is happening in the world is scary and made scarier y our interpretations of it.


 Comment Written 20-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
    Thank you for stopping by and reviewing my little runt.
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Iza, you nailed it. Great commentary on where we are in this mess. You are so right. We can't say anything without offending someone for something. Sad state. I, like you, miss the days of comedy and slap stick that offended someone all time, but it was all funny and most everyone laughed. Thanks for the reminder and for posting.


 Comment Written 20-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
    Thank you:)
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