This is such a lovely poem about "One kindly Deed." You wte so beautiful to share your message. God blesses us when we bless others, ALWAYS! Hid grace is always better than ours. Before we leave this earth, we should always try to bless others. It's the Christian way. This is a very inspirational poem. Great rhyming of your words, also. Thanks for writing. Well done. Happy future writing:-)
I enjoyed your poem very much. It contains such good advice.
Treat others as you would wish to be treated yourself. Be kind, be empathetic. It is reward enough to know that you have made life a little better for someone. That you made a difference, however small.
Best wishes, Debra
It is amazing how one good deed outweighs is worth a thousand times more than even the slightest slight diminishes one, and how it is remembered for all eternity in the heavenly abode of neighbor and friend. This is a great poem of excellent rhyming, beat, and subtle moral teaching quality. Age does have its advantage; it is called the living of life. giovanni
What an awesome mantra for living a life that matters! You've got me thinking...we have different mantras for different ages. We get wiser as we read the Bible and also get older. I seriously would give you a six if I had it. This is precious and meaningful!
-Thanks for the note
and poem, jaybird.
-A well written poem with
a very good message and
examples of how to "life a heart"
of someone in need.
-They say that what you do for
others comes back to you tenfold.
-I think there is some truth to that.
-A very good concluding verse, too.
HI Jay, some wonderful advice my sweet friend...
I love doing things to help others...make me happy
when I know I could help...I love your poem...and
love your message...very well written...love Linda xxoo