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One Kindly Deed


A great way to live your life

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Your poems are so inspiring and appear to be very well thought out. I enjoyed reading this lovely nudge of advice to help us to see a good path to follow. Bravo for your continuous careing.

Ralf


 Comment Written 30-Aug-2020


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Hello Jaybird,
This is such a lovely poem about "One kindly Deed." You wte so beautiful to share your message. God blesses us when we bless others, ALWAYS! Hid grace is always better than ours. Before we leave this earth, we should always try to bless others. It's the Christian way. This is a very inspirational poem. Great rhyming of your words, also. Thanks for writing. Well done. Happy future writing:-)


 Comment Written 27-Aug-2020


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Hello Jaybird,
I enjoyed your poem very much. It contains such good advice.
Treat others as you would wish to be treated yourself. Be kind, be empathetic. It is reward enough to know that you have made life a little better for someone. That you made a difference, however small.
Best wishes, Debra


 Comment Written 27-Aug-2020


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Very good advice throughout. We are not here for ourselves, we are here for others. I liked you selfless poem, tis better to give than receive. Well done poet.


 Comment Written 27-Aug-2020


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This is very good advise you gave us here. Thank you for sharing this. You're right, every moment we use counts. I'm sure you lifted many hearts in your life.


 Comment Written 26-Aug-2020


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It is amazing how one good deed outweighs is worth a thousand times more than even the slightest slight diminishes one, and how it is remembered for all eternity in the heavenly abode of neighbor and friend. This is a great poem of excellent rhyming, beat, and subtle moral teaching quality. Age does have its advantage; it is called the living of life. giovanni


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What an awesome mantra for living a life that matters! You've got me thinking...we have different mantras for different ages. We get wiser as we read the Bible and also get older. I seriously would give you a six if I had it. This is precious and meaningful!
Tina


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-Thanks for the note
and poem, jaybird.
-A well written poem with
a very good message and
examples of how to "life a heart"
of someone in need.
-They say that what you do for
others comes back to you tenfold.
-I think there is some truth to that.
-A very good concluding verse, too.


 Comment Written 26-Aug-2020


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HI Jay, some wonderful advice my sweet friend...
I love doing things to help others...make me happy
when I know I could help...I love your poem...and
love your message...very well written...love Linda xxoo


 Comment Written 26-Aug-2020


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Beautiful!. I like the message. The rhyming was great. The poem had an easy flow which made it easy to read. Your message is loud and clear and a good way to live.


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