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15 Syllables Contest Entry

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LisaMay
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Hey Sis - you've honed 15 syllables into a nice little encouragement for our children to live their best lives. Congratulations for your well deserved win! (Nice photo... but I feel a sneeze coming on with hayfever!)


 Comment Written 27-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
    lol. I've been sneezing for two months. Enough already! Thank you girlfriend for the review and stars. Good to hear from you. This was yet another collaboration only it was my turn to post. Glad you liked it. I'll get back to you eventually. You know the drill..... lol
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This is a great message about flourishing and thriving at greatness, we should teach our children to live in courage which is strength to sow the seed of greatness; well said. ALCREATOR


 Comment Written 25-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
    This is a terrific review, Alcreator, and I thank you for these kind comments. Also thanks for all those stars! Much appreciated.
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Simple, direct, compelling. I can only think that if the second line had read "that courage is the strength," it would have read more easily but been disqualified as toooooooooooooooo long.

Well done harmony with pic,
Aaron


 Comment Written 25-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
    HAHA! tooooooooo long. Thank you, Aaron, for this great review. Yes, fifteen syllables is restrictive so you have to do what you can do to make sure you're not disqualified. I appreciate you taking the time to read this and I thank you for all those stars. Thanks!
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