Contact Us | En español    
         Join today or login

Status

New Here?
Sign Up
Fast! Three Questions.

Already a member?
Login

Contests

Share A Story In A Poem
Deadline: Dec 1st

2-4-2 Poetry
Deadline: Dec 2nd

Nonet Poetry Contest
Deadline: Dec 4th

True Story Flash
Deadline: Dec 7th

5-7-5 Poetry
Deadline: Dec 10th


Writing Classes

0 classes available. Click here locate a class and to learn more.

Rank

Poet: None
Author: None
Novel: None
Reviewer:None
Votes: None






Reviews from
Fear Comes Calling


A 5-7-5 about fear and courage.

  40 total reviews 
Comment by
Cindy Decker
Premier Author
Premier Reader
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  44
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  69
Review Stars
  Rank:  44
 
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
Tina, this is t h e best 5-7-5 I have ever read. I bookcased it so I can refer to it from time to time, whenever I need to feel closer to the Lord. It's witty and very effective work.
Good luck in all your contests
Cindy


 Comment Written 30-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
    Thank you, Cindy! You just made my day! I feel honored. Thank you so much! I hope you're having a good Lord's day:)
    Hugs,
    Tina

reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
    Thank you, Cindy! You just made my day! I feel honored. Thank you so much! I hope you're having a good Lord's day:)
    Hugs,
    Tina

reply by Cindy Decker on 30-Aug-2020
    😊!

reply by Cindy Decker on 30-Aug-2020
    You too,Tina

reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
    :)
Comment by
Mastery
Published Author
Semper Fi
 
Poet Rating
 
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Author Rating For Novels
  Rank:  5 (+1)
Review Stars
  
 Rank:  47
 

#5 Ranked Novelist
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Hi Tina. Long time since I saw a promoted post by you. this is a wonderful Haiku, as you know.
I would like to see you win with this entry. Bless you. :) Bob


 Comment Written 29-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
    Bob!!! I've been meaning to catch up with you. Thanks for the review and good thoughts. It was a fun write!

reply by Mastery on 30-Aug-2020
    :) Bob
Comment by
2019 Script Writer of the Year
Bill Schott
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  30
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  11
Author Rating For Novels
  Rank:  9
Script Rating
  Rank:  3
Review Stars
  Rank:  8
 

#9 Ranked Novelist

#3 Ranked Script Writer
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
This 5-7-5, Fear Comes Calling, has the right set up and plays a turn-about is fair play for the efforts of Satan to discourage seekers. Clever.


 Comment Written 29-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
    I appreciate the review. Thank you:)

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
    I appreciate the review. Thank you:)
Comment by
Bill Pinder
Premier Author
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  40
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  85
Author Rating For Novels
  Rank:  30
Review Stars
  Rank:  99
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
I really enjoyed your focus in this poem and wish you the best of luck in the contest. Great topic and well chosen words to remind us to refuse fear. Bill


 Comment Written 29-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
    Thank you Bill. I appreciate the nice feedback!
    Tina

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
    Thank you Bill. I appreciate the nice feedback!
    Tina
Comment by
Gert sherwood
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  31
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Review Stars
  
 Rank:  60
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
A good and powerful haiku Tina Crute.
To me what you are saying,
when there fears knocks on our heart,
All we know that Our Lord Jesus will help take away the fear or fears, Jesus is in our hearts.
Your last line is so true
Jesus is home and answers, I will make room in your hearts
so Don't knock on any inn doors.
I wish you the very best in this haiku contest.
Gert


 Comment Written 29-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
    Thank you Gert! Well said. You totally got it! He slammed the door on fear,lol!
    I appreciate you, friend!!

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
    Thank you Gert! Well said. You totally got it! He slammed the door on fear,lol!
    I appreciate you, friend!!

reply by Gert sherwood on 29-Aug-2020
    Hello Tina Crute
    You are welcome
    Gert
Comment by
zanya
Premier Author
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  81
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  65 (+1)
Author Rating For Novels
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  62
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Yes an interesting presentation of a message of hope based on Faith and how it supports us in times of crisis - an appropriate visual to illustrate -thanks for sharing


 Comment Written 29-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
    Thank you for reading! Yes, hope over fear...good point!
Comment by
dragonpoet
Premier Author
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  77
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  59
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
The first to lines seem hopeful. It implies Jesus will help. But the last line says he says 'No room at the in" which seems to mean he won't be. But then the Bible says he always will. Is the about the doubt we have about having faith?
This is more a senryu than a haiku. A haiku being about nature and a senryu being about human feelings.
Good luck in the contest. Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet


 Comment Written 29-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
    Thank you for reading. It's about Jesus not letting fear in. He tells fear theres no room. I went with a broad interpretation of haiku as I've seen some on here before, so fingers crossed. You take care and thanks again for the comments. I will consider that fir sure we hen writing haikus again.
    Tina

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
    Thank you for reading. It's about Jesus not letting fear in. He tells fear theres no room. I went with a broad interpretation of haiku as I've seen some on here before, so fingers crossed. You take care and thanks again for the comments. I will consider that fir sure we hen writing haikus again.
    Tina

reply by dragonpoet on 29-Aug-2020
    Tina, That meaning makes sense too.
    I have seen the broad definition of haiku here too. It just depends on who is leading the contest.
    Joan
Comment by
Sugarray77
Melissa
Premier Reader
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  18
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  39
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Great job on this very meaningful verse. I really liked your satori line where you project what Jesus would really say... there is no room... in the inn or otherwise. Very well done and I wish you good luck!

Melissa


 Comment Written 29-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
    Thanks so much Melissa! Yes, Jesus might say that:) Thank you for the compliment!

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
    Thanks so much Melissa! Yes, Jesus might say that:) Thank you for the compliment!
Comment by
estory
Premier Author
north carolina
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  94
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  117
Author Rating For Novels
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  65
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
I thought you had a nice, unique play on the words here, from Luke: 'No room at the Inn.' In this case, Jesus is shutting the door on your fears. A great poem of faith. estory


 Comment Written 29-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
    Yes, you got it! Thank you for reading! Jesus slammed the door,lol!
Comment by
ameen786
Premier Author
Premier Reader
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  121
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Script Rating
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  193
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
It is said that the only thing we have to fear is fear itself; but with strong faith in God, no fear can weaken man's resolve to face life's challenges. Good luck!


 Comment Written 29-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
    That's right! Thank you for reading. I like your summary!
  -1-  2 3 4 5  Next Page 


Market your book.
Advertising options.
Football Chapter 5 part 1
A mother faces life's struggles.


Share or Bookmark
  Contact Us | En español | Advertise With Us

© 2015 FanStory.com, Inc. All Rights Reserved. Terms under which this service is provided to you. Privacy