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The Time is Right


A reflective letter to myself

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Comment by
SoulRising
The Heart has Reasons of it's own
of which Reason knows nothing!
 
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beautiful poem about a real conflict.
My advice would be to mention to others less fortunate, but if there seems room in their hearts. Certainly keep the pearls to yourself if people are likely to mock.
But I may be biased, since just mention of 'Jesus' softens my heart! May God bless you, and bless you and bless you!


 Comment Written 31-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
    Thank you for the thoughtful review and comments! I will take them to heart.My husband and I signed up to do a program at church that help people who have fallen on hard times. Just committing to that feels right:)

reply by SoulRising on 31-Aug-2020
    i wish you the very best on that!! really do.

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Thanks,we are excited!

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Thank you!
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Thank you so much for this exhortation to share the good news. I remember reading so many books on evangelism and feeling guilty for not witnessing. But now I feel a peace that God will use me at the right time.

Fanstory's "evil eddy"
How have I madeĆ? it through? (remove funny character)


 Comment Written 29-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
    Thank you for the review! I have learned too, that He presents us opportunities.
    Thanks for showing me Evil Eddy, lol. I will fix it now.
    Have a great Saturday, friend!
    Tina
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I love this stanza, no matter what we make sure the show must go on:"
The time is right
to jump in the fight
and show the world
they're missing out,
without a doubt
on the greatest love
and guiding light.
"


 Comment Written 28-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    Thank you, Iza. I love your name by the way. It sounds like a writer's name. Thanks for your take on the poem...yes the show must go on!
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What I liked best about this poem was your very obvious demonstration of passion for your belief. That is a difficult emotion to portray honestly and sincerely.
Congratulations


 Comment Written 27-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    Thank you Michele. I so appreciate you considering this poem. It makes me happy that you read the passion in it. I was trying to express that. Thanks again!
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