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celebrating Christmas

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Hi Kace, my favorite holiday...not just for the birth of Jesus...but it brings people together to show that love Jesus wants us to have for each other...I love your poem sweetie pie...and loveeeee this picture...gives me chills...
very nicely written my sweet friend...God Bless...love you...Linda xxoo


 Comment Written 04-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
    Hello Wombat, So pleased you liked, thanks for reading. Love K xx

reply by l.raven on 05-Sep-2020
    always Sweetie Pie...and your so very welcome...love xxoo
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YEs, Christmas is a time of joy and I like to think about Christmas all year round. "Diving for treats we can see" is a wonderful line full of fun and takes the reader to a joyful time.


 Comment Written 31-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
    Thanks so much Elaine, we need some joy to look forward to. Love, Kay.
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My very favorite day of the year. Your descriptive ABC poetry piece shares much of the fun and love this special day portrays. Nicely done and good luck in the contest!


 Comment Written 30-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
    Hello Mimi, Thanks so much for reading and glad you enjoyed. Blessings from Australia! K xx
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It's a frightening thought that Christmas is creeping up fast. Your lovely ABC poem has such a warm, friendly, spiritual feel about it. I do love Christmas, but not so much since my parents have gone. Good luck in the contest, Kay. Have a lovely day! :)) Sandra xx


 Comment Written 30-Aug-2020



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    Hello Mrs Seagull, Thanks for dropping by. I think we have to look ahead and imagine the happiness that Christmas brings. I hope you are keeping well. Toby will be 16 this year! I still walk him a little bit.
    Take care my dear friend, love, kay xx
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Good luck in the contest, Kace. This was a definite stress release and for sure a surprise. It provided a refreshing breath of all the scents associated with Christmas. May I ask if Christmas is a different day than here in the USA, I do know each country has their own twearks. Again good luck.


 Comment Written 29-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
    Hello my friend, Thank you for reading and enjoying. We need a break from all the stress. No, we celebrate on Dec 25, just like you. Unfortunately, no carols or church services this year :-( love K. xx

reply by aryr on 30-Aug-2020
    You are so welcome, Kace. Who knows, perhaps we will be done with this mess. We can always dream, it was sweet and refreshing.
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Hi! Nice a-b-c-poem with Christmas coming! I just wondered: could you change the last line in: "Greatest love in every way"? That would have the advantage of the G prolonging the abc in C-D-E-F-G and it gives you one letter more to get a better equilibrium in the format.
Just a thought!


 Comment Written 29-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
    G'day Marjon, No, there are only five lines, the fifth being a different letter. Thank you so much for reading, I believe we need a 'lift' in looking forward to Christmas even tho' there will be no church services or outdoor carols. Blessings, K xx

reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 30-Aug-2020
    Sorry! Didn't know that!

reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
    I'm sure I answered this? Four letters running and one not.

reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 30-Aug-2020
    Sure, you answered. Thanks, friend.
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Your ABC poem is a breath of fresh air--concise, delightful, and descriptive of sights and events many people look forward to ALL year. I am one of them.


 Comment Written 28-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
    Hello Janice, I wanted to give readers a 'lift' out of the covid mire. Even tho' we won't have outdoor carols or indoor church services. Everything has gone to streaming - definitely not the same! Blessings, K xx
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Your picture choice is beautiful Aussie. Great job with your contest entry. I wonder, though, if 2 lines that start with the same letter (although that last line can be any letter)is a bit confusing. That is just my pinion--file 13 it. Your poem reads well with great imagery. I do like the way you said Christmas is love in every way. I believe I would write find--finding to go along with diving.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan


 Comment Written 28-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    Because you know what you are doing as far as poetry. I take on board your comments and will change it. Thanks you dear friend. Love, Kayxx
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