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Wandering And Wondering


My long and exciting life.

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Hello Jake,
Another excellent rhymed poem.
There are some questions that don't have answers,
though many will insisted they know.
On the first day God created the heavens and the earth;
on the second He created wonder,
and that is what makes life so fascinating.
I think you have it right.
Robert



 Comment Written 02-Sep-2020


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Seems sad and lonely. I think you would benefit from Bible reading, but I don't think religion is good. It caused many wars. People take the Bible and twist the words to suit their cause. I only believe in one religion out there. But personal Bible reading with an updated version is heart healing. You are brave to put your negative feelings out for others to judge. Kudos.


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The author's words are engaging, motivating and creative. Thank you
for the author's notes - they are well stated and uplifting. I enjoyed
the positive words and thoughts of this poem. The poem flows and
connects well. Have a wonderful day!....Maria


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There are always question and we have to accept that in this life we may never get the answer. There is something out there and we should all take time to at leat acknowledge it.


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Jaybird, I think the older we get the more we accept that we don't need to know thew answers. Somewhere, He's got all the answers and He has our backs! Thank you for this sweet poem!


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Good Morning, Jaybird!
How lovely are the sentiments of your well-crafted poetic offering.
Scientists do not always have the answers; I am made more of this truth the longer I live.
Thank you for sharing!

diane


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These are exquisite sentiments 'With wandering, came wondering '-yes the search for meaning as we go through life - and what we actually discover - thanks for sharing


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Yup we wonder above the things in front of our eyes but in the end we still look upon the wonders from above. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.


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I feel very inadequate commenting on the work that you have been doing since the day I was born--I will be 76 this week! (My Dad was born in 1921.)

Thanks, and congratulations, for your courageous and insightful wisdom, recognizing that there is a mysterious reason why everything is the way it is and why birds know how to fly.

Psalm 139:14: "I praise you because I am fearfully and wonderfully made." Thanks for calling us to share this view of life with you. I hope God will continue to bless your years and that more of you will rub off onto those in our modern times who haven't noticed what you have written about.


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-Your notes and poem
are appreciated, jaybird.
-I like your poem very much.
-It flows smoothly with
good meter and rhyme, along
with very good imagery
and questions.
-I like the comparison in the second line.
-All of the -ing words in verse two
are very good, and add to the meaning.
-The concluding verse is very good, too.
-Have a good evening and rest of your week.


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