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Pie Contest


The losers were not pleased!

  20 total reviews 
Comment by
Y. M. Roger
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What great food and fun!! :) Love your use of the word 'brouhaha' for your acrostic -- an awesome presentation 'in a word'! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :)


 Comment Written 03-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
    Yvette, I do miss the old county fairs a with the Blue ribbon pies, jams and crafts!!

reply by Y. M. Roger on 04-Sep-2020
    Oh, goodness -- so do I!! ;)
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Sally Law
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Eyes on these gorgeous pumpkin pies. Like writers, bakers have an ego, but at least they can enjoy their offerings when all is said and done.

Great entry for the contest. I wish you all the best with this and hopefully some pie.
Sal :)


 Comment Written 02-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
    Sal, thanks so much!
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Jmf4119
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I enjoyed your Pie Contest poem. Broughaha is a perfect word to use in this situation. I have not heard it in years and it brought memories back of another time when my mother used it to describe and uproar.
Great mono rhyme.
well done
Blessings and good luck.
Janet


 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Janet, I do find I miss the old county fairs complete with blue ribbon award winning pies, jams and crafts galore.
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Boogienights
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This is delightful and funny. I can definitely see a ruckus starting up in a competition. Especially when it comes to food. Now I'm craving pumpkin pie. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Boogienights, thank you for reviewing and commenting, now...go make that pie!
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Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written acrostic poem about the word brouhaha. An uproar taking place when the pumpkin pie baker wins the prize for the best pie in the baking competition.


 Comment Written 31-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Sandra, thank you, I do miss the old time county fairs with the blue ribbon, pies, jams and tapestries.
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Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Name' writing prompt.
This acrostic spells Brouhaha and describes it in a story.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon


 Comment Written 31-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Sharon, thank you, I do miss the old time county fairs with the blue ribbon, pies, jams and tapestries.
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Patty Palmer
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Very true about the word broughaha. At first I didn't realize the word then you put it in your notes and it hit me, I knew that! LOL I've heard people use the word loudly to make up a fightening laugh!
Good job!
Patty


 Comment Written 31-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
    Patty, thanks for the review and comments, author notes do help readers and I am pleased this is so for your experience.
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Jacob David Collins
 
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I enjoyed reading this piece and I thought it had a nice flow which kept me engaged. I thought the rhyme worked really well in your piece as well. A well written piece. Good luck in the contest!


 Comment Written 31-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
    Jacob, thank you very much!
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Pam (respa)
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-Good artwork and
presentation.
-A well written poem
with a good topic, imagery,
and rhyme.
-You describe this contest well,
and the commotion that went with it.
-I guess the "ordinary joes" had the
right idea; ignored the brouhaha,
and won the contest.
-Good luck!


 Comment Written 31-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
    Pam, smiling back at you in appreciation!

reply by Pam (respa) on 31-Aug-2020
    You are very welcome😊
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docbets
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I love a rhyming poem. And I love pie. Making pie is a big task, and it is eaten and gone before you know it. Your poem conjures the feeling of the competition, and humor. Four stars because the two lines ending in "uproar" and "roar" bothered my ear, for their sameness. I wonder what other word you might use to preserve the rhyme, but more interestingly. Good work!

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 Comment Written 31-Aug-2020



reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
    docbets, thank you,
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