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Summer Nights


Sounds in the Summer

  21 total reviews 
Comment by
Lisa Wharton
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Exceptional
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I love this symphony and love these band members. There are cute and very capable. You are right on target for an acrostic poem with the first letter and the sound.

Exceptionally done.


 Comment Written 02-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
    Thank you so so much!! I appreciate the stars and your thoughts!

reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
    Thank you so so much!! I appreciate the stars and your thoughts!
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RPSaxena
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Hello Tina Crute,
Nice piece of poetry in the form of an Acrostic Poem meeting the desired norms, having impressive phraseology, captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and transparently depicting its theme.
Contest winner!
CONGRATULATIONS!!


 Comment Written 02-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
    Thank you, RP! This review means a lot. Your review is as eloquent as poetry:)
    Tina

reply by RPSaxena on 03-Sep-2020
    Tina Crute, Most Welcome!
    With best wishes,
    ~ RP
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Liz O'Neill
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Your use of the literary technique of alliteration will draw the reader in. The fun part of this poem is how much use of another literary technique, onomatopoeia there is. You have effected the sounds of the night populaton. For readers who have never have had such a night life experience, they can have a little sense with your choice of words.


 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Wow, Liz, thank you! I enjoyed your review because you were specific about what technique you enjoyed That means a lot and helps me a lot!
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amada
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This is a very nice and original season's acrostic poem. It reads very well. I so like moonlight lullabies...Soft and very enchanting melodies. It was a pleasure to read.


 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Aw, thank you, Amada! I am glad you liked it! Thank you for giving me your thoughts. You saying, enchanting melodies ... makes me want to go camping and listen to them.
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elchupakabra
 
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It's filed under stories as opposed to poems so that's my only real comment but the piece as a poem is well done. Great work and best of luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing. Later daze.


 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    I have been trying, but it is not letting click on poetry. Not sure why. Thanks for letting me know though! It is listed in the contest where its supposed to be. Thank you for reviewing and giving me stars!
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Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, anonymous,

A fine entry for the
Seasons acrostic writing prompt contest. Good words and connection between lines that improve the flow. Nice Summer imagery.

Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy


 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Gypsy, thank you so much, It was a fun one to write because I love nature. Thanks for the good luck wish too! :)
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Pam (respa)
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Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
-Great image.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-I really like your poem, too.
-It has a good rhythm and imagery.
-You capture the spirit of the
forest creatures very well:
"N octurnal owls join in with HOO's"
"T he croaking of the chorus frogs"
-I really like your poem and hope
you do well in the contest.


 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Aw, Pam, thank you so much!! I had fun doing it, but you just gave me a big bonus! Thanks for telling me specifically what you noticed. I appreciate it !

reply by Pam (respa) on 01-Sep-2020
    You are very welcome and deserving. I voted for you; I hope it sticks!

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Aww...thank you! I hope it sticks too!
    have a good, rest of the evening and a good day tomorrow!
    Tina

reply by Pam (respa) on 02-Sep-2020
    I guess it did, Tina😊 You have a great day and enjoy your success.

reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
    Haha. I guess that means I am learning from the best! Pray for me today? Going to see someone very dear before she goes to heaven. Who knew a heart could feel this heavy?
    I appreciate you!

reply by Pam (respa) on 02-Sep-2020
    I will do that, Tina. I am sorry about your friend, but I know you will provide comfort for her.

reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
    Thank you Pam. She passed away minutes before I got to her.:(
    I just came on here as a diversion today. I appreciate you much.

reply by Pam (respa) on 02-Sep-2020
    I am sorry, Tina, but maybe she sensed that you would. There have been strange stories sometimes of what people think or hear before they pass on. Take care of yourself.

reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
    You may be right. She spared me. Even down to her last breath, she was a saint through and through. :)
    I will write about her. That will help.
    She was actually like a second Momma to me. I called her Momma Dillard and her husband, Daddy Dillard. Them's some good people!
    God blessed me with them.

reply by Pam (respa) on 03-Sep-2020
    Thanks for sharing, Tina. I was wondering who the Dillards were. They sound like people you can lean on, too. I think it will help writing about her, and she would like that.
Comment by
thaities, Rebecca V.
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This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Seasons acrostic contest. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!


 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    That is a comment no one has told me yet, so I appreciate the comment. I am glad it was easily understood. Thanks for the good luck wishes too. I really thank you!

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 01-Sep-2020
    I voted for this entry!

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Why, thank you. That means a bunch!

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 01-Sep-2020
    You're quite welcome!

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    :)
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Veenbee
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Very nice poem. Many of my summer nights I stayed awake because the crickets were too loud. And if I heard any movements from the nocturnals, I prayed they weren't close. If only I had seen it as a beautiful symphony played just for me I might have slept better. LOL Great job. Veenbee


 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    haha...now you make me wanting to go camping so I can hear the singing too! It was fun, so I really do appreciate you giving me your thoughts:)
Comment by
Janice Canerdy
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This is an excellent acrostic poem--vividly descriptive, with an appealing variety of strong nouns and adjectives; skillfully composed, with good rhythm and rhyme.


 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020



reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Janice, thank you for reviewing my poem. It was so fun to do! I appreciate your assessment!
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