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My Cottage By The Lake


A place for peace and serenity

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This is a lovely poem filled with inspiration. We should all have the quiet place when we can find those rhyming lines and feel the contentment that a place like your cottage brings.

Well done.
Blessings
Janet



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It must be nice up in your cottage by the lake. Your rhyming lines just take the reader there although, only in spirit. Thanks for giving a little insight into the inspiration to your poems. It is quite lovely.


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Wow! This sounds like a wonderful writing retreat!

'My cottage, lake and stately trees,... This quiet lake (reflects) the sun
and moonbeams play, when day is done." A great description. (You might want to check this word.)

A very nice concluding phrase ... 'chanting whip-poor-wills'

Enjoyed!!


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I love the image that you create with your words. The peace seems to wah over me allowing me to take a deep breath and reset from a day or moment that had taken over.


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Lovely poem! I also love the country. It's such a peaceful place to write. You have done a masterful job of evoking a feeling about the place you describe.
Well done!


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The author's words are clear, interesting and creative. I found these
words a real comfort to those that write. A serene quiet place to muse and imagine! The poem flows and connects well.
Hope you are having a great day!


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That would certainly do it. It sounds like the ideal writing spot to get your poetic juices flowing. This is a lovely poem and makes one go there with you in their mind.
Line seven seems to be out of meter and interrupts the flow a bit, but I think that can be addressed. Maybe> "This quiet lake reflects the sun." I enjoyed the poem Bill


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A very well-written poem about a special retreat where you can go for inspiration and free thoughts to write poetry from your heart. It is a privilege to have a special place where you can write.


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Beautiful writing. Portrays peace and quiet so well. A place to go when feeling down. Rhymes very nicely love the choice of words. Quiet lake glistens in the sun and moonbeams play.


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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. I like how you structured this poem. It is clear and concise. It is original and unique. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!


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