Love Bites Write a poem about love gone wrong or lost love. It can be sad, raw, or just plain angry (Just keep it clean). Express the emotions of the darker side of love. Any style or length. Be creative.
It must be nice up in your cottage by the lake. Your rhyming lines just take the reader there although, only in spirit. Thanks for giving a little insight into the inspiration to your poems. It is quite lovely.
The author's words are clear, interesting and creative. I found these
words a real comfort to those that write. A serene quiet place to muse and imagine! The poem flows and connects well.
Hope you are having a great day!
That would certainly do it. It sounds like the ideal writing spot to get your poetic juices flowing. This is a lovely poem and makes one go there with you in their mind.
Line seven seems to be out of meter and interrupts the flow a bit, but I think that can be addressed. Maybe> "This quiet lake reflects the sun." I enjoyed the poem Bill