Love Bites Write a poem about love gone wrong or lost love. It can be sad, raw, or just plain angry (Just keep it clean). Express the emotions of the darker side of love. Any style or length. Be creative.
Enjoyed this poem very much. Your describe your cottage by the lake as a magical retreat from all the problems and the hustle-bustle of the world. I am sure a place like this would do it. You are very fortunate to have it. Great rhyming and flow; superb descriptive imagery and presentation; thank you for sharing your private paradise with us.
A simple comforting poem. I've found that kind of peace when we spend our vacations at the lake in a cottage by the water. The soothing sounds and laid back feeling lets my mind wander and I do a lot of writing during that time. The atmosphere soothes the soul, don't you agree? Love the poem and the soothing feeling it brought me this moring!
-I am glad you enjoy
your cottage, jaybird.
-It sounds like a very special
place, and I can understand
how it would influence your writing.
-It's the kind of place I
wouldn't mind visiting.
-I like your concluding
couplet with the whip-poor-wills.
-Have a good day and weekend, too.
Nice piece of poetry having impressive phraseology, enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting its theme.
2nd stanza is particularly noteworthy.
"My Cottage By The Lake", is an exceptionally well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. With craft and skill, this talented poet has told it as it is.
I very much look forward to seeing your next post. This to me, is a six, but unfortunately I've run out of them. I look forward to reading your next post.
This is an exceptional poem with a great depth of emotion behind it. I can easily picture the topic. Your word choice and implementation is masterful. Thank you for sharing, I'd give six stars if I could.