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My Cottage By The Lake


A place for peace and serenity

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Cedar
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Hello Jay,

What a beautiful peaceful poem you have penned my friend. I believe this one is my favorite so far.

Your perfectly rhyming words just rolls off the readers tongue. I truly enjoyed reading it.

Keep them coming my friend...Bill


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Lovely! The simplicity of the poem complements the message/theme really well....we all have such places where we can let our sub conscious mind take over.... Thanks for sharing


 Comment Written 04-Sep-2020


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Enjoyed this poem very much. Your describe your cottage by the lake as a magical retreat from all the problems and the hustle-bustle of the world. I am sure a place like this would do it. You are very fortunate to have it. Great rhyming and flow; superb descriptive imagery and presentation; thank you for sharing your private paradise with us.


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A simple comforting poem. I've found that kind of peace when we spend our vacations at the lake in a cottage by the water. The soothing sounds and laid back feeling lets my mind wander and I do a lot of writing during that time. The atmosphere soothes the soul, don't you agree? Love the poem and the soothing feeling it brought me this moring!
Patty


 Comment Written 04-Sep-2020


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-I am glad you enjoy
your cottage, jaybird.
-It sounds like a very special
place, and I can understand
how it would influence your writing.
-It's the kind of place I
wouldn't mind visiting.
-I like your concluding
couplet with the whip-poor-wills.
-Have a good day and weekend, too.


 Comment Written 04-Sep-2020


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Hello Jaybird1,
Nice piece of poetry having impressive phraseology, enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting its theme.
2nd stanza is particularly noteworthy.


 Comment Written 04-Sep-2020


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Hi, again this is spot on and in three short stanzas you set your magic to work and it certainly comes out when the reader gets a chance to read.
many thanks for sharing kind regards Colin


 Comment Written 04-Sep-2020


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"My Cottage By The Lake", is an exceptionally well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. With craft and skill, this talented poet has told it as it is.
I very much look forward to seeing your next post. This to me, is a six, but unfortunately I've run out of them. I look forward to reading your next post.


 Comment Written 03-Sep-2020


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Your writing spot sounds fabulous. I can feel the peace and serenity coming through your words.The pale blue background is relaxing. I enjoyed reading this well-rhymed poem.
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Jay Bird,
This is an exceptional poem with a great depth of emotion behind it. I can easily picture the topic. Your word choice and implementation is masterful. Thank you for sharing, I'd give six stars if I could.
Cheers,
A.Fortier


 Comment Written 03-Sep-2020


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