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My Cottage By The Lake


A place for peace and serenity

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Your sonnets are always meaningful and touching and the rhythm and rhymes are relaxed and most enjoyable. I have a similar style and like you prefer rhymes but I bow to your expertise in capturing the feelings as you do so easily Thanks and all the Best!
Phil


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We all need at least one special place that inspires us to write--where the atmosphere sets the thoughts free to be written. Your poem is very lovely.
The tone and message are calming and appealing.


 Comment Written 03-Sep-2020


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What a lovely spot you have to retreat to when needed. Poetry runs freely there and your heart is lifted and at peace. You are indeed blessed.


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Hello Jaybird,
My dream in life is to live by any type of water; beach, pond, lake or ocean. To be in a cottage by any one of these bodies of water would be Heaven. I love that you get your inspiration in your cottage by the lake. What a blessing? I'm sure you get serenity, calmness, peace and inspiration to write. This is a lovely poem of about how you get your inspiration? Well done. Happy future writing:-)


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Your poem is in good form. I enjoyed reading your well-written poem. The rhymes are good as is the story. I could see everything you mentioned about your special place where you become inspired to writ beautiful poetry.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan


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I agree that we need a place to commute with the source of inspiration, mine? It's in the very early morning when my wife is sleeping soundly by my side, and the deafening silence fills the room. Beautifully written in your gifted rhyming, smooth way, blessings Roy


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A scene of quiet and tranquillity where the Muse certainly awaits 'the words I seek seem to appear'- such exquisite surroundings 'moonbeams play when day is done'- enjoy the poetic interlude!


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This is one incredible poem, Jay. It has so much genuine emotion and feelings are crystal clear thanks to your talented way with words. Bless you. Bob


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Wow, what a blessing that you have that cottage by the lake where you can experience peace for your soul and inspiration for your poet's pen. Thank you for sharing and keep enjoying that peaceful setting!


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Your cottage sounds idyllic, so tranquil. You describe it so well in your poem and in excellent rhyme. It sounds like the perfect place to write poetry, no wonders yours is so good. Take care Jen.


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